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Old 07-01-02, 04:06 PM   #1
iSsUeS$619$
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Question ~SHELZZ~ vs iSsUeS

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20 lines max
best verse wins lets do this ! you need to check in before battle starts i'll post first verse peace !
 
Old 07-01-02, 04:09 PM   #2
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aight checkin in

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yo verses deadline is tomarrow afternoon because I gotta jet in a little bit but ima start keying it in and if I don't finish then I'll post it up tomarrow morn.
 
Old 07-02-02, 02:24 AM   #3
iSsUeS$619$
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KEEP IT REAL

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Devilish intensions seak thru my demise //
Superstitous bitches trying to act real ambitous //
To them wack cat’s I come off real fuckin visious //
I’m just to infinite the consequences shall make you loose your exzistance//
My mentality causes lyrical casualties to every body in your family!!///
There is no half stepin in this game ethier your insian ,lame, or a record company got you tamed//
You can’t handle the fame, your hole rhyme styles simply just a shame //
You thought you could out wit , I’ll make your brain split as I spit some uniqe shit//
I’m fully equiped , bilstikaly on a massacure as I extract an il rap to make you look like crap//
Steady lacing the facts through out this track//
I’ll leave your ass in an eternal nap from an internal heart attack//
So the next time your probally better off to decline or end up killed in a few lines for having such a waek ass mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 07-02-02, 08:41 AM   #4
~SHELZZ~
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YO YO YO YO YO

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yo issues your barz is weak I cut them wit hacksaws,
and thats all your raps like tylenol~ cause people sleep on you,
wait..... they noddin off~ Ima bout to make you Hot wit this sawed-off,
Iam Raw dawg you not mature enough for me wait till yo balz fall,
ima change yo walk to a crawl all tha way to a screachen halt,
your cheapper than a hooker I just bought~ on a sac of rocks,
Ima lock...why you tryin to battle me you don't got the key,
and It surley aint freestyle, you aint got stats,
and tha only thing you flow on is on yo tampax,
thats what that bloody stic is you got in yo hand,
and tha only time you flip shit is in a frying pan,
nigga you came to this battle wit a switchblade..you got laid,
you can't battle, your world play is compared to 1st grade,
you have childish ways my lyrical clilps spray in 100 ways,
so when I spit in this battle you can never be in my face||

LET THE VOTES COME IN.
 
Old 07-02-02, 12:13 PM   #5
J.T. KNUCKLES
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hmm..

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good battle between tha two but Shelzz got my vote
better punches hard desison thought.1
 
Old 07-02-02, 06:25 PM   #6
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shells had better punches and more of them, maybe it just read that way. But thats what counts right?
anyway i vote for SHELLZ.


not by much though
 
Old 07-02-02, 06:39 PM   #7
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Thumbs up this battle was a lil more fun

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nice verse dawg ! good voteing peeps ! peace
 
Old 07-02-02, 07:52 PM   #8
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i see pretty strong verses on both sides of the board the way it breaks down mechanically for my vote is:

flow= shellz

volcab= issues

multis= issues so many more then the other guy and that ain't even that much

punches= issues

word play issues

the other's guy verse against maybe some one else could of been better but in my eyes the vote goes to issues
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Old 07-03-02, 07:56 AM   #9
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wtf?

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aight 2-1 and what do you mean my verse against someone else? that makes no fuckin sense dunn?

Last edited by ~SHELZZ~ : 07-03-02 at 07:59 AM.
 
Old 07-03-02, 11:51 AM   #10
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My vote goes to Shellz cause that otha kids verse seemed to me olike it was more of a freestyle then a battle verse..

flow=issue
punches=shellz
word[lay=issues
vocab=shellz

kind of even but shellz took this beacause he threw more shit at you.
 
Old 07-03-02, 01:14 PM   #11
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Very nice battle, one of the btter one's on R.B. To the point...both had good verses, equal in some aspects, but I think Shelzz came more with the nice lines, the one I liked the most was the tylenol like, shit was old, but funny...

My vote-Shelzz
 
Old 07-03-02, 01:52 PM   #12
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my vote has to go to issues......the other dude had a flow that was hard to follow.....issues verse was ok...but the first 4 or 5 lines is what got me......i felt that......vote for issues.....
 
Old 07-04-02, 08:24 PM   #13
~SHELZZ~
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aight

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4-1 uppin fo more votes lets get this over wit
 
Old 07-04-02, 09:28 PM   #14
rar one
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Quote:
yo issues your barz is weak I cut them wit hacksaws,
and thats all your raps like tylenol~ cause people sleep on you,
wait..... they noddin off~ Ima bout to make you Hot wit this sawed-off,
Iam Raw dawg you not mature enough for me wait till yo balz fall,


good multis in there..

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Punchs-SHelZZ took it.. came harder
Vocba-Issues, way better
Rhyme scheme- tie, both were kinda either choppy or over drawn..
Metaphors-SHelZZ

vote= SHelZZ explained ^^^ there

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