10 lines min 20 Max
no crew votes
no d/r
chapter spits first!

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Its clear this chump is new to RB.. as well as the whole rap game
cos really.. wot kinda idiot publicly guns his own name??
The fact is that all who attempt get violated rather quickly
Have ya so full of holes ya clothes look like they made of swiss cheese
Put ya whole career on a sculpture.. it'll lack the views
u cant fuck wit me.. it'll take me hours to spit wack as u
I'll wreck the best text shit ya said.. son ya as good as dead
ya idea's aint clickin in? i'll 'leave' you open minded when bullets exit ya head
Ya wack ass bars.. dawg its simple, u aint competing with the best
like Jordan back thru time.. ill have ya wit a .45 at ur back.. n '23' in ya chest...///

oh yeah see i only have ten lines but my layout is dif so it takes up more room than i expected! good luck

1.First off a Black grenade aint a gun
so its plain to see im gonna have ya on the run

2.you must be a cross between a bulldog and a shitsu - bullshit
thats why your lines stink like u stepped in it
3.are u a virgin to rap?
i mean who starts off with a name attack
which ends up to be a lame attack
4.you need to face the facts
cause if ya wanna battle me
you have to try to rattle me
5.but im steady as a rock
and you bout to feel an lyrical shock
bet u were hysterical the first time u tried cock
6.which way do u wanna go - i mean ya got no flow
your punches are weak
you must be a freak
thats why your lines reak
7.when u checked into the mental hospital
wat did they say -
they said this patients to fucked to stay
8.but they let u go out and play
wat an age we live in
were retards / are free to get new starts
9.so better change ya name
cause this is the end of the game
GAME OVER your neva gonna be the same
10.let me put the last nail in the coffin
this is why u didnt last
cause you couldnt handle the blast
from the BlackGrenade!!

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Chapter - another nice verse.. an u won it based on ya opener alone..



iv been waitin fa someone to put the machine gun pic in the wrong place! Consistant punches.. alot of nice concepts there.. but u do go off point a bit an get somewhat general.. then again ur new here so ya not likely to know much about people.. overall a pretty dope verse kid..

Grenade - eh the style has gotta change quick man.. puttin 1. blah blah blah, 2. blah blah blah etc jus aint cool.. an u used alot of unecessary words jus to create a rhyme but it was heavily stretched.. any punch was lost by the time u finished the line.. the structure is weak too.. u need to diss ur opponent more directly an get a bit personal..

VoTe = Chapter

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um yea black that was really bad u dont number ur stuff it didnt really have a flow backslashes would help punches didnt make sense no personals really u need to elevate. u repete ur self

now for chapter u did good good flow pretty good punches a couple personals no multies but a good battle keep up the good job

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Yo LIL RENEGADE is makin his way up da ranks.
ya boi is back

o vote on the battles in my sig heres the link tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111755

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Yo LIL RENEGADE is makin his way up da ranks.
ya boi is back

my vote chapter yo im me on aim some time peece 1

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Yo LIL RENEGADE is makin his way up da ranks.
ya boi is back

-keep votin-

lookin to finish this..

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Drop a vote plz.. other guy aint botherin to upp cos he's gonna lose.. smh.

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