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06-21-07, 10:35 PM | #1 | |||||||
Maggot
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"Smokey Pillows"
IP: 8AA0 A31D
Its the curse of the rebound girl. The characteristics of a weak relationship exposed for what it is. This is my attempt at convincing myself I really do like my new girl.
Produced by Shadowville Productions. "Smokey Pillows" http://profile.myspace.com/index.cf...iendid=11148497 http://www.soundclick.com/ovdoseakadavidbirdsall
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06-27-07, 09:31 AM | #2 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
first i noticed your too lound and not mixed into the beat enough your on top of it.....i can still tell your reading a bit, your not sayin it like you feel it, your sayin it like your suposed to.....the hook was mixed real week, n i dont like it that much....its like meh....the beat is a lil poppy for a song with this subject....its ight...couldnt listen to it more then once tho....get ya quality up a lil, n learn to say things like you mean em....
rtf on stalker
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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06-28-07, 04:12 PM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
DUDE!...Imma smack you when I see you! You came on soooo loud I jumped...totally took me by surprise
vocals are mixed waaay too loud... I like the sound of the hook tho...it was delivered/flowed well I think with some polish, u cud sound hot. 1 |
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