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08-16-04, 07:21 PM | #1 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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I'm straight out gifted....
IP: 8646 AD30
Children, still went, up in the fray
So when they step in the building I bring it down in a blaze Now who the bitch, hold up, who rollin' with you? See, all my problems got rolled up, in one crew Find em runny, when I aim with a clip, they might flee Kinda funny, how the name of the clique, describes me The bait's bold, the four's cocked, try hard, and straight fold What I wrote, was Fort Knox, my bars? Is straight GOLD Now we watch, a biatch, get optioned for trade I drop in a vacumn and watch your OXYGEN FADE Their hopes are grey, faded after Gifted dropped some blaze So 5-0 tagging the bodies as a hobby, of these obvious gays Lost in the maze, little rats ain’t Lethal, just good pets And wearing sweatshirts in ghettos doesn’t make ya hood vets fuck your threats, if we met, I’d shatter your body with ease Crack bones on pavement, bodies adjacent, when I bloody ya fleece Ya verses are leased, so stick to living like poor people on streets Cause yall could eat a microwave and still not be capable of heat All your flows, combined, equals a infant’s piss stream compared to mine And it seems, your team, thinks together to find words that rhyme But we ain’t feeling your lines, they lack creativity like artistic kids Cause the crowd never recognizes you bitches, for your simplistic shit uh oh ...looks like rap battle gots a new threat... |
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09-15-04, 01:24 PM | #2 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 70CD 2D00
not bad son..........holla at me.......text battle.....jus let me kno
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09-15-04, 09:15 PM | #3 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
dag man i like the structure and shit just work on not being like random keep you stuff on topic it was really nice though keep it up man and your gona be big
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09-15-04, 10:06 PM | #4 | ||||
New to RB
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IP: E6D3 C326
i liked the shit
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09-17-04, 01:56 AM | #5 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 28AD 5545
dayum boi.. ur pretty damn good.. ur in tha right place.. kill them battles.
and welcome to tha syte! ~*Holla @ YA Gurl*~ ~*Dilemma*~ |
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09-17-04, 02:03 AM | #6 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
pretty good flow punches could be better go try out for p.s.a
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