Aight u drop 1st
no bitin
no hate
no dik ridin
no recyclin
7-8 linez! 20 min to drop

This is my 1st battle...so here it is

Lyrical punchlines to knock out weak emcees.
cant stand up my skill like they chopped at the knees//
The Big bad wolf aint the villian of this story,
Cuz when Dynamik kidnapps the grandma her death is more gorry//
You step to me but there aint a question whose gonna win,
you might as well give up before this battle even begins//
Im'a heat you up, turn this shit into a wolf roast,
But im gettin it to hott, now u burnt, like overcooked toast//
This is the end of the big bad wolf's fairy tale.
Yo mission was to get me, but i guess ya mission failed//

Nice drop dog but i gotta give you your 1st loss. (Little advice come harda next time)

Im bout to sink dis bitches ship like he was da Titanic//
Im Dynamic, cuz my lyricz kill so fast youll die standin//
Lyrical Punchez dog? none of em landed//
Can already feel his panic, cuz hes about to get his first loss and he cant stand it//
When i accepted da call out you shoulda raced off//
Cuz im crazy like John Travolta, ill rip yo FaceOff//
No offence dog but you linez was kinda lame//
Ill discrace yo name, and make dat "P" stan for ya pain//

Uppin 4 votez (Late cuz i got kicked off da net)

dynamic spit hard and personal and i like how he shit on the wolfs name but the wolf came back hard to and i liked his verse still i like slick gansta shit so i gotta give it to dynamic


yall nigga vote on my battles with killa and daillest.good look.
caliph

Opener-Dynamik....Titanic and standin is a bad rhyme
Closer-Tie
Flow-Dynamik
Structure-Tie
Punches-Dynamik
Personals-Tie
Creativity-Dynamik
Wordplay-None really

Overall-Dynamik...punches came a lil harder...pretty close in my opinion but Dynamik took it...no hate good battle keep elevatin.....

plz drop honest votes on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137419

Uppin for some votez in dis bitch. Ill holla on your battlez.

ok i liked both of your verses alot and i want yaw 2 tryout for lethal Sinz if u dont got crews yet.. but i gotta say i liked Dynamik's more he did everything right for his 1st battle... he had nice flow and this was my fav line



return da favor BBW like u said... u didn't say i had 2 vote 4 u 2 get votes... so i should expect a vote 4 u plz vote lol heres da link 4 it
its a funny battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137406

Dynamik "P"

Lyrical punchlines to knock out weak emcees.
cant stand up my skill like they chopped at the knees//
->>weak opener

The Big bad wolf aint the villian of this story,
Cuz when Dynamik kidnapps the grandma her death is more gorry//
->>decent

You step to me but there aint a question whose gonna win,
you might as well give up before this battle even begins//
->>its been done to death

Im'a heat you up, turn this shit into a wolf roast,
But im gettin it to hott, now u burnt, like overcooked toast//
->>my fav line out of your battle

This is the end of the big bad wolf's fairy tale.
Yo mission was to get me, but i guess ya mission failed//
->>decent


Big Bad Wolf

Im bout to sink dis bitches ship like he was da Titanic//
Im Dynamic, cuz my lyricz kill so fast youll die standin//
->>decent opener

Lyrical Punchez dog? none of em landed//
Can already feel his panic, cuz hes about to get his first loss and he cant stand it//
->>second line stretched as fuck

When i accepted da call out you shoulda raced off//
Cuz im crazy like John Travolta, ill rip yo FaceOff//
->>decent punch

No offence dog but you linez was kinda lame//
Ill discrace yo name, and make dat "P" stan for ya pain//
->>weak closer


It was close but i vote dynamik...wolf your battle wasnt long enough and i just liked dynamiks a little bit more. You guys should both keep elevatin and stop with the // after your lines.

\/hit these up\/

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Uppin for some votez in dis bitch. Ill holla on your battlez.

Lyrical punchlines to knock out weak emcees.
cant stand up my skill like they chopped at the knees//
self glorication no punch
The Big bad wolf aint the villian of this story,
Cuz when Dynamik kidnapps the grandma her death is more gorry//
wack for real
You step to me but there aint a question whose gonna win,
you might as well give up before this battle even begins//
blah
Im'a heat you up, turn this shit into a wolf roast,
But im gettin it to hott, now u burnt, like overcooked toast//
gay but an attempt at a punch
This is the end of the big bad wolf's fairy tale.
Yo mission was to get me, but i guess ya mission failed//
wack closer

your verse overall was wack keep elevatin

Big Bad

Im bout to sink dis bitches ship like he was da Titanic//
Im Dynamic, cuz my lyricz kill so fast youll die standin//
wack

Lyrical Punchez dog? none of em landed//
Can already feel his panic, cuz hes about to get his first loss and he cant stand it//
wack

When i accepted da call out you shoulda raced off//
Cuz im crazy like John Travolta, ill rip yo FaceOff//
self glorification
No offence dog but you linez was kinda lame//
Ill discrace yo name, and make dat "P" stan for ya pain//
weak closer

wack battle but vote for Dynamik for coming less weak

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^gotta agree....both of you came below par servely...big bad had nothing at all..no punches..worldplay..flow.or vocab....Dynamic barely had anything...weak punches but atleast it was something...so..
v-Dynamic P

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I agree dis had to bee ma weakest one so all i could say to tha man is good drop.