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02-18-05, 05:27 PM | #1 | ||||
My Dick Stay Wet
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Black History dedication PEEP IT
IP: 0825 899A
Az yall know ive been droppin open mics bout black history..its obvious why..
peep this one This is my dedicationt to the voices of the past generations Not just black but to abe who signed our proclamation to the white man who taught douglas how to read to Rosa for not gettin her ass out of dat seat mistreated and beated but we stood strong,its what we needed but not to the people who wanted our race completely deleted but we live now to tell the stories of the past my dedication,cuz wit out dem we wouldnt have last the whitemen used to take advantage of our black meats flipped da script, now we get da vanilla flavored treats but not all was bad but not good was all sum of dem helped us when we started to fall to this is a dedication to EVERYONE who put in good work now its all betta but for them my heart still does hurt........ |
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02-18-05, 05:34 PM | #2 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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Concept is good once again and the way you approached it was very nice. Short but powerful drop here. Liked how you approached it from different angels, thanking everyone and not just black but also white people who helped the black out. Vocab was balanced quite well, had your flow on lock and everything basically...Liked the strong yet emotional vibe it had to it...
Solid piece! DQ
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02-18-05, 07:36 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 0825 899A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1967779
there go my link....also uppin dis thang........... |
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02-18-05, 08:09 PM | #4 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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nice man i read it finished and did the black power sign lol...j/p
nah nice content, gd flow, vocab was good could be a bit better, longer drop craved here..lol keep em comin man - 8/10
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02-18-05, 08:43 PM | #5 | |||||
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i'm feeling this joint...concept was nice...lyric were just inspirational...makes you think...flipped a few misconceptions that many of my people dont think about or realize yamean...this was nice fam...this is what i like to see...the only thing was the font was to small...lol...stay up
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02-18-05, 08:53 PM | #6 | ||||
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I was reallin feelin this fam, i liked the concept alot especially during black history month...at least i think its february. Work on your imagery just a little bit though, other than that i thought it was a nice drop...8.5/10
RTF in te sig fam...keep the chain going...
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