We stood fast in front of it waiting for something to drip,
to penetrate closed lips, made of lightning kisses,
or something to replace this fire stream of instability, will i be
ever enough for you?
where do we go my love,
when the lights were never on, not like this,
thrown, against the wall of confusion stuck,
sticking, licking the dripping beauty of uncertainty,
if only for an eternity,
yet once again there are no words-
when the trees paint spiders on the earth,
chasing me, tracing my veins,
when i am hungry....I AM HUNGRY...
the thirst that burns through silence,
through the sound of every lonely night,
leading me forward always wondering,
piercing, singing fire and shedding....the ashes,
that have led me here to your.....door........

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

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this was real good--- I don't come round the poetry section much- but this had alot of feelin to it, your wording is really good- you say alot of stuff with little words... tite, 1

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thank you, appreciate it........any more thoughts?

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

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*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

nice poetry fam i liked it this is also tha first time i came into tha poetry section to but its pieces like this thats gon get me to come back good work dun

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ay alot of feelin in dis poem...really feelin it...ya nice drop...peace

wow

nice poem keep up the good job

thank you peeps.........

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

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