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Old 05-18-05, 05:44 PM   #1
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I'm brand new to this internet rhyming thing
but come from the days of hi tops and new jack swing
when fighting meant fist to fist
now to fight means to die
i'm asking what is this?
Madness spreads all across this land
and you are only classed as a man if your wears total at least a grand
I don't understand and can't make head nor tail
If my peers are not dead then they're slowly rotting in jail
on the shores as more guns are issued
there's a rise in the sale of coffins and toilet tissues
so many issues don't want to endlessly complain
but my heart feels the pain when i see young baby mothers hooked on cocaine...

Jus' a quick one what you thinkin,sayin?............ holla!!!!
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Old 05-18-05, 05:46 PM   #2
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yeah, you gotta elevate a lot man..... read some tutorials and work on your structure...overall not bad...but jus elevate.

where u at in the UK?
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Old 05-18-05, 11:27 PM   #3
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