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Old 09-03-06, 05:05 PM   #1
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11. Flash (4-1) vs 12. Aeral (3-0)

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Old 09-03-06, 05:18 PM   #2
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Old 09-03-06, 08:33 PM   #3
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for showw

let's go 20 on pics.
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Old 09-04-06, 12:56 PM   #4
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Iight pm me your pic and ill do the same
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Old 09-06-06, 11:00 AM   #5
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waiting on you.
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Old 09-07-06, 12:02 AM   #6
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Fuck this child molester gay jackie chan lookin mothafucker. am to lazy to go 20 so i went however many ive got written down.. match it and shut the fuck up



This kids a lame, we all know that aint your child
n the way you hug her
makes your gay ass look like a pedofile
your sick, just look at her struggling to get away
its apparent you got hanes, but you cant have her your way
Dude is wack as hell...he managed to fuck up all his bars
And I'd get personal, but I don't know who the fuck you are
Dude you're a bitch it's proven y'all so just check this here
Pussy is like you getting respect and you ain't had sex in years
Bitch we know that ain't your kid, fuck this pedofile's wack
See everyone has a Destiny < so give them THEIR child back
you might be only half a fag... ya verses keep me laughing man
n' you must have that fire cuz you look like a flamin jackie chan
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I mean shit is you asian or just squintin hard go buy a rice hat bitch. Now go die
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Old 09-07-06, 12:53 AM   #7
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think your hood cos you got one on? bitch, plzzzzz.

I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
dude that's bad company, but your a loner, so i'll never laugh,
& i looked at your ceiling... & saw the only FAN you'll ever have
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
The heavier it is it floats better, that's tested so consider it a rule,
with that being said...
..tell your bitch to let the vest go, there's no way she'd ever drown at the pool
Dude the church outfit is wack, seriously who the fuck are you scaring..
..when your eyes are fucking baggier than those clothes that ya wearing
How long ya'll been together? man fuck, i swear it's disturbin,
The bitch can get bangs.... and this faggot'll still be a virgin


You SUCK.
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Old 09-07-06, 12:08 PM   #8
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Rofl nice verse... just for your info that aint my girl... was my beruit partner
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Old 09-08-06, 11:46 AM   #9
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Don't act like you clueless flash. Oh wait that suits you. anyways...

your sick, just look at her struggling to get away
its apparent you got hanes, but you cant have her your way

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I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter

one-sided battle. Flash really had nothing. even the line I quoted was ehh/decentish at best. Your punches are way to simple, try to get some wit into your verses for once in your battle career. But Aeral, didn't need to do much. but those two lines I quooted were pretty nice. Even some of the other lines i didn't quote were coo. so good shit by him. Aeral got this easy.

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Old 09-08-06, 12:41 PM   #10
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Bitch we know that ain't your kid, fuck this pedofile's wack
See everyone has a Destiny < so give them THEIR child back

vs.

I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
The heavier it is it floats better, that's tested so consider it a rule,
with that being said...
..tell your bitch to let the vest go, there's no way she'd ever drown at the pool

Not a bad battle. Flash, your verse was okay, just lacked in quotables. Opener, jackie chan, and hanes lines, I felt those were all almost quotable, but not quite witty enough to be so. Destiny's Child shit was really funny tho. I felt Aeral came much more fresh. Other than that played bag line, the rest was pretty good. Opener especially hit harder. Aeral, work on being a little less wordy tho, improved flow would help you, but you got this.

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Old 09-09-06, 04:53 PM   #11
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Dude you're a bitch it's proven y'all so just check this here
Pussy is like you getting respect and you ain't had sex in years
Bitch we know that ain't your kid, fuck this pedofile's wack
See everyone has a Destiny < so give them THEIR child back
you might be only half a fag... ya verses keep me laughing man
n' you must have that fire cuz you look like a flamin jackie chan

vs

I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
dude that's bad company, but your a loner, so i'll never laugh,
& i looked at your ceiling... & saw the only FAN you'll ever have
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
The heavier it is it floats better, that's tested so consider it a rule,
with that being said...
..tell your bitch to let the vest go, there's no way she'd ever drown at the pool
Dude the church outfit is wack, seriously who the fuck are you scaring..
..when your eyes are fucking baggier than those clothes that ya wearing
How long ya'll been together? man fuck, i swear it's disturbin,
The bitch can get bangs.... and this faggot'll still be a virgin

IMO this was a onesided battle...Lamp...I felt like if you really didn't care for this battle till the end. but then you repeted a punch and just rewrote it to what it should have been in the first place. thats why I could only quote the last bit of your verse man. Aer had a tight verse and he didn't stick to one concept like Lamp did with the whole pedaphile thing.. . ..

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Old 09-09-06, 05:22 PM   #12
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I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
How long ya'll been together? man fuck, i swear it's disturbin,
The bitch can get bangs.... and this faggot'll still be a virgin


vs




Bitch we know that ain't your kid, fuck this pedofile's wack
See everyone has a Destiny < so give them THEIR child back
your sick, just look at her struggling to get away
its apparent you got hanes, but you cant have her your way


good battle led had a couple cool lines, i just think aeral was more harsh consistent
so /aeral vote
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Old 09-10-06, 04:10 AM   #13
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your sick, just look at her struggling to get away
its apparent you got hanes, but you cant have her your way
Dude is wack as hell...he managed to fuck up all his bars
And I'd get personal, but I don't know who the fuck you are
(2)

vs.

I know what you're going for, see that's my little sister in the pic i used..
..but the overweight red cheeked bitch on ya left? what's your excuse!
There you go chilling at the white house, but believe i'll put this puss in order,
peeped your eyebrows and immediately noticed you're a BUSH supporter
Dude the church outfit is wack, seriously who the fuck are you scaring..
..when your eyes are fucking baggier than those clothes that ya wearing
How long ya'll been together? man fuck, i swear it's disturbin,
The bitch can get bangs.... and this faggot'll still be a virgin
(4)

Oh shit, Aeral ripped this verse man, lmfao. LOL @ the 3 last bars.

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Old 09-10-06, 08:15 AM   #14
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Aeral doesn't vote.

Flash wins (5-1)
Aeral loses (3-1)
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