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07-27-06, 12:58 PM
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Fuck Blue Hefner
IP: 209F C922
wen i spray my gat ya back collapse dude u aint shit but a bitch who sweat my dick wen its time 2 rhyme i dont waste my time i just paste a line and erase ya kind take off ya thong cuz ya cant write a song dat was just a quick verse i didnt have 2 curse just qunch my thurst
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07-27-06, 01:01 PM
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IP: 3318 E4B0
alright man work on ur structure to me this just seemed to simple and plain nothin stood out work on ur vovab also and jus keep droppin shit to get better
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07-27-06, 01:03 PM
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Zar Bi-Shup
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IP: 4312 793E
- No personals
- No pattern - No flow - No structure 1/10
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08-01-06, 01:17 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Another pointless read.....
...no hate...
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08-01-06, 01:17 PM
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IP: 777B 65FF
Yo this wuz not worth doing because u juss embarrassed yourself with a very pointless and Ignorant rhyme or wut eva its wuzz well this had no structure no flow wutsoeva no hate on the boy but go to the tutorails get ya skillz up than try again untill than this wuz very weak and a non hitting diss mostlikely u must be hatin on blue hefner well ...done...1...
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