Checkin in, ill spit in a minute hope your ready!

Checkin in-- my verse will be up in the next hour.

Yo 12 Lines of MC meltin Fire

Normally I just laugh, I don't Prefer to Fight-Herbs/
But Im bout to play like "Titanic" and Slam this "Iceberg"//
Seven Thirds Nasty at this- writin rhymes is my passion/
I saw this kids pic and it said "Gay" in the caption//
This kid is wack- If he wins then he's a cheater/
Meltin Icebergs like 90 degrees with this "heater"//
Just Go Home now- Ya punches'll never "Hit-This"/
Givin 2 different meanings when I say your "Diss-Missed"//
(the diss missed, and dismissed)
Your better off if you dont even post a verse-in-this/
Ya punches "skip" the mark more than church services//
A shitload of Nightmares is all "SevenThir-D"(7:30) Gave-You/
Cuz I'm Past ya "bedtime"- like "adult shows on Cable"//

Seven must have sex in circles the way he fucken-around
This bitch is going no-where-fast like plants stuck in the ground!
Seven Ill? You play with blocks where you locate your wordplay
Like demolishin skate parks cuz I'll break Seven's vert-abrae!
Ok bitch now calculate and figure I'm hot your bars get more snickers than Don Knotts
I'll scissor this bitch into a chop shop remove hands n seconds as if I took apart clocks
Seven is dumb,his brain is the size of a grain of sand
This bitch meets defeat all the time,he’s still tryna to shake it's hand!
So you better make a run for it like collen clensing pills
All of your rhymes is ass, and bitch crack kills

uppin for votes... will return the favor just post a link.

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Can we get some votes in here please uppin this biatch

Uppin For Votes Still...................................

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chea chea dis was a nice lil battle yall g0t popin 0ff nah mean....
Seven came like 55% iller den Iceberg kuz of the multis and nice punches
along wit creativity....both emcess had a nice flow and good structure...but this line basickally got Seven my vote:

A shitload of Nightmares is all "SevenThir-D"(7:30) Gave-You/
Cuz I'm Past ya "bedtime"- like "adult shows on Cable"//-----Seven

nicelt worded lol and funny
v/Seven

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Uppin--- Still need VOTES PPL...........................

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sEVEN tHIRD WON HIS. HE WAS THE ONLY ONE WITH ANY REAL PUNCHES, AND SOME OF THEM WERE PRETTY NICE MAN, GOOD WORK.
vote - seven third/

return tha fava?

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124476

SevenThird- Opening was average. I liked some punces in this rhyme, the church services line and the Dissmissed lines were really creative. The flow and vocab went well with the rhyme. Good Job.

Iceberg: Yo... you won this battle for one reason. Your vocab and flow were average and so was your opening and closing. In fact the closing was horrible in my view, you should've came way harder then saying "crack kills". But the reason Im voting for you is because your punches were stronger than his and thats what you really have to pay attention to. Keep Spittin Fam.

Vote: Iceberg

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I TOOK TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR BATLLE, THANK YOU)

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uppin for votes again.........................................

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HOLY FUCK...

this battle was da bomb ass pussy i havent seen so much wordplay in a newb battle or well two guys new to rb... hot shit yo

ok this is how it goes... ice berg your verse was bomb till about the middle where your struc fucked up it kinda lost me... but seven third stayed good all the way threw and the wordplay... dissed missed... hot shit and the seventhir D.. one that as ill too..

so for made wordplay and ill struc my vote goes to seven third

yo hit up my battle ... link is in da sig

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