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Old 06-05-04, 11:27 PM   #1
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from my view ive seen a lot of shit around here//
took my fair share of hits without showin fear//
shift the gear, now im doin a buck 50 down the ave.//
dizzy from this indo,wonderin why i aint crash//
puttin my self in these situations i cant afford to have//
the reward in front of me, the arm wound makes it hard to grab//
but ive never given up on my life so why start today//
but im constantly slippen off like a principles tu-pay//
my way, is to show these pussy ass cowards the high way//
they hate cuz they see me eatin off a bigger plate//
sat at my bed side prayin, doin nuthin but truthfull wishin//
made everything appear out of nuthin like a fuckin magican//
im from where people are low, where theres no chrome tiers//
where in the sky, are always old sneakers on telephone wires//
so i always kept my head out the clouds, it would lead to nuthin//
where the only things comin out ya mouth was slang and cusein//
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Old 06-06-04, 11:30 AM   #2
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very basic...need to go deeper with poetic techniques and shit...but its ok for ur firts ever drop..
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Old 06-06-04, 03:11 PM   #3
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yea im wit hexen i wasnt feelin it u need to keep elevatin iight....................................
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