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01-02-05, 06:31 AM
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Better than you..
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Rhyme Pad
IP: 01C3 560C
Just an audio song im gonna record tommorrow.
Spittin from my notepad Check it check it...ye ye lyrics selected rhyme styles to b perfected I’ll inject ya upper section, infectin ya brain dissolve you bastards nothing but ashes You just got cremated, Heads collected, from lyrical slaughters wack emcees step to me, beheaded No question, I’ll rip ya brain waves, distorting it, ya rap fiends addicted to hip hop im feedin it Doing this its a relief, a pressure vent, like hell im bent, brutally merk you bitchs Chasin riches through rap political statements, sign u up for an early rap retirement U suck kids, know im Heaven sent, bound to rhyming in binary, u cant decipher my matrix Its hardcore. An Australian equivalent to o.d.b rest in peace n much respect A moment of silence……… hit up the mic that’s right im tight killin this chilled beat Sit back and smoke some weed with me feel the music Ya feelin me an emcee on the rise, of course the skies the limit Shouts to my man OMB laying down sick tracks, we’ll rep the same name one day From Down under Nos ripping it, cutting sick, i gotta say hes tight in everyway And together we rip shit like clits in porno flicks, leaving u clicks in dismay Make u wanna quit, all kids do is flip, just trip out on it, play this for your enjoyment Stuck in unemployment, a bright mind with a lifetime ahead of raps deployment Jeeper’s creepers, oh the features trauma, stuck in ya head like leeches Chillin out on gold coast beeches, drinking beers with heavy drinkers What a good flogging teaches faggot emcees, salivating with bloody mixtures I never ever aspired to whats been n gone before, elevating more Delving deep into this beat defeat the odds, watch me unlock new doors Far beyond, ladies strip down to just ya bras Take this, and I’ll adjust u past the stars straight to mars To a deep space that’s vast Its alright baby u safe now Let me lead u, open up I’ll show u how Receive this its my gift to you What else can I do but say I love you Ye ye I observe the world with a frown full of clowns selling out every which way n that Whats rap coming to these days huh? Hip hops turning into a played art Fed up n sick to my guts of rap artists rappin for clubs Commercial faggot emcees ive got no respect for these C.E.O’s n record labels getting pay checks for fuck less Its heavy on my mind, stressing for works putting in the time Do the same and soon u’ll find u’ll be heavy on the grind U gotta earn ya respect, effect the minds of those who hear ya rhymes If it wasn’t all negative I’d be positive how the fuck did you get commodities Cunts living the lavish life abusing their rights dj’s repping pink shirts Call me a jerk accusing you skirts nothing but shirks with girly smirks.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… Last edited by Trauma : 01-02-05 at 08:37 PM. |
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01-02-05, 06:37 AM
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IP: 01C3 560C
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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01-02-05, 08:38 PM
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IP: 01C3 560C
uppin for some feedback strain ya obese, lazy ass', cunts.........peep my shit dammit!
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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01-02-05, 09:03 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
pleas e fix the strucutre
 you striked some interesting points in here flow was sort of aight..lil streched..add a bit more multis in this and it'll turn out ok..you can edit  but i give it a 7/10
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01-03-05, 06:49 AM
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IP: B587 18C9
structure may appear fucked.....its because its written to audio, thats just my flow style atm. prolly shouldnt have posted it as text only reason i did was so i could get it on a mates computer. but shit may aswell up for more feeeeeeeeeeed.
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..ADLIB..
Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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