c'mon boi.......come @ me again and see if some things changed a little!!!

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Dead is what ur gonna be
------------------------alive is what i'll always be-------------------------

D.N.A.

close this shit i already set it up ..be easy wun

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chea yeah check me out

the only way i'll lose this battle is cuz i'm @ blunted
i'll leave you dead and say yeah dawg i done it/

now you descesed--da Queens gonna miss you while you rest in peace--i'll make some muthafuckn trouble now dat you gone and i'm on da streets/

yall bitch niggas ain't gotta lie i know i can
cause i rock dis shit like a global band/

i'll stick you up like i did walmart wit two 9's in my hand--i'll spray once den come back around for everything dat still stand/

yall bitches can hate me now--yall can bring da heat--and lay me down--but yall won't lay me down for good/

all your rhymes is some bullshit--you full of shit--you too full cuz you steady eat'n my click/

You can say i'm fucked up but i ain't seen doubles
but i see in da future if you keep rhyme'n all you gonna see is trouble/

yo mom should have never birthed you--you should have stayed a embryo--cuz nothing in dis world is worth you/

i don't give'a fuck if i can't merk you
but see me in person i'll physically hurt you/

dats why i'd hate to see you in person--
cuz it ain't gonna lead to nothing good--but the shit might worsen/

all your rhymes need more prominence--cuz dey sorry--i'm da shit so to you --i'mma dominence/

i'mma diminish your exsistnce so you'll no longer embarass yourself--you ain't nowere---you unsophisticated--even less den basic/

i'm complicated--yall still try'n to figure why killin niggas makes me so captivated/but now my clip has been loaded and activated/

i'mma kill you and dat ain't gonna be debated--i ain't know i would grow up to be hated/

i'm surprised i've made it dis far--i ain't think i could make it/

but earlier you came at me wit ya gats loaded--but you ain't have no extra clips to go around for extra picks/

but was it you talkin bout my girl
i keeps a extra bitch/

stashed away 4 backup--you'll never know when da first hoe might act up --dats when da nigga she fuck'n wit gone have to get smacked up/

in da back of da club gone have 2 get clapped up--forensic gone be at da scene wit ya guts in da body bag rapped up-- no finger prints so i can't get jacked up--get to da crib tell my bitch to get packed up--open da safe and get da stacks out--climb down da fire escape--use da back out--

ain't nobody tell you to act out


yeah chea
holla @ cha boy ya heard!!!!!!!!!!

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Dead is what ur gonna be
------------------------alive is what i'll always be-------------------------

D.N.A.

i dropped my lines down for da rematch already so hurry up boi!!!!!!

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Dead is what ur gonna be
------------------------alive is what i'll always be-------------------------

D.N.A.

round 2 muh fuckah nigga wants more aight

Get ready for round 2 nigga cuz iam bringin more heat//
Every were i go iam leavin niggas layin in da streets//
Takin u to tha round 2 and iam a merk yur fuckin ass//
u takin ya play toi bubbah and he jerk in yur fuckin ass//
Of course i keep it real and state tha fuckin truth//
Fake niggas like u will neva make it into tha booth//
Fuck..u get on tha front and they pull u out like a tooth//
this nigga wanted a rematch he got dat now he wantin a truce//
My niggas aint use truces they all use da glocks n duces//
Elephant dick nigga that'll be in ya girls throat and choak her//
u da opposit of dat lion cuz u got courage to try and take tha jokah//
Nigga i got so much time on ma hands its like iam holdin a clock//
Ill be laughin at chu like jim carry wen u be holdin a glock//
Get out ma face nigga u aint shit home boi nietha ya block//
Gangstaz role roun herre we aint take no fakahz//
Absolute Queenz nigga we aint take no harlem shakahz//
fuck all dese fake rappas i see from da dirrty iam gettin tired of da south//
nigga you best be callin da fire deptpartment cuz iam spittin fire out ma mouth//
Well tha flow stays deadly as da bullets..so does tha sex//
Unreal is waat chu is to me nigga....i be grippin da texx//
Nigga thats round 2 aight home boi ..aight whos next//

easy nigga holla back wun...

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uppin htis muh fuckah wun e.z n niggas

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uppin this muh fuckah.........holla back...................

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ok jokah u had hard punches.i liked the structure again that earned points and ur opener was good. this was long but good verses from both of u.jokah some good personals i liked it and not a bad closer. dead great verse not bad at all. good opener weak punches good strucutre. it wasnt ur best the flow was on good but jus next time come wit harder punches and a lot harder personals u had a lota personals but they were kinda weak

v/jokah

iight it goes like dis..jokah u merked him wit betta vocab, nice structure and better flow..dead u need to elevate and make ur lines longer cuz it fucks up ur flow..no hate dawg
return da favor wit honest votes
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131053

dead ya rhymes are dead, you barely rhymed an you was to simple.
jokak did ery thing betta than you, so i give this one to him

aight uppin diz muh fuckahhh...holla back wun....

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uppin this muh fuckah dont sleep on it niggaz lets go wun...

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dayum jokah that was sickness mayn..good rhyme scheme that gave you the battle..you had sick flow sick punches sick personals that shit was jus ill..good shit fam

DNA: wassnt feelin it..all ur shit was stretched....but your gettin there

vote:da jokha

can yall return the favour and vote for this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085

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