yo ten lines, no feeding blind spit, get yours up w/e the sooner the better
get some constructive votes on this too

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i'm a check in now spit in like half an hour
maybe sooner

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ya i dont think imma drop that quick cuz i got class in a quick few doo, but i'll get 'er up there today prolly

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i'm ready 2 spit
a bit later than i expected but here it is

See if u can *picture* this *perfect* scripture cuz I’m a major league rap pitcher and my curve spit is bout to hit ya// ~1~
U can take infinite swings cuz u’ll never hit this king, I’ll leave u drownin in my rhymes without a life ring// ~2~
Battlin me is a gamble and I run this royal casino, I’m legendary like Tarantino, cutting u leave u ‘Scarfaced’ like Al Pacino// ~3~
Ure pictureperfect “2” so I’m a rip u twice, this battle one sided, it’s like pittin Vanilla Ice against fuckin Obie Trice// ~4~
Check it ure style is what I stole, I be getting all the votes on this poll and I don’t fuckin Kid-Man [Kidman] my name aint Nicole// ~5~
I’m a end ure rap career with simultaneous explosions that are nuclear blowin ure rear to another fuckin hemisphere// ~6~
Beatin me is a mission impossible and u aint tom cruise, everybody can learn from ure battles…learn how to lose!// ~7~
It truly is a fuckin crime listenin to u tryin to Busta Rhyme, so I’m gonna ‘Break Ya Neck’ so hopefully this’ll be the last time// ~8~
All I hear are moans and groans from all the ppl listenin to u tryin to spit stones whilst I’m spittin bricks to crush ure bones// ~9~
This is the end of this battle and I can see picture is startin to pray, cuz he knows his ass aint got nuthin to compare with wat I say.// ~10~


Now picture get ure spit down!!

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Why u wanna step to this, u aint smart, there aint no more kings, so I gotta brighten u up like the president of bling bling.
Yo check this shit it’s a tyranny take over, cuz this cat couldn’t spit dope wit a mouth full of baking soda
Check these fingers side by side, its now time for the fuck king solo rhyme
Yo confidence is incompetent wit the fact your teddy bear like u spittin in a polo shrine
Hold me. Don’t make me laugh, even though u spittin there not even your teddy bear let u hold ‘em in the past
your rhymes aint hot they couldn’t keep me warm if they was written in fleece bars
My punches so felt they takin this bitch away like police cars
King solo aint that a take off of hon solo, fuck star wars kid that when u know a man has gone homo.
U couldn’t harm me if u was spittin from a gun/mic sharpened to a point, U couldn’t blaze me if I was weed rolled into a joint
Go ahead bitch dick ride that’d be fine, no one riding back even though u a big black woman u still cant spit thick lines
No one ganna follow this king so he claims, his crew reputation is next to his name (solo)
Solo bitch cuz I dammed u quick, yo flow a no go thanks ta pic.

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homo shit in there again...yo that shit is so fuckin played
and callin me a big black lady, made up personals dont work either
try me again wen u got sum real skillz

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king solo dog you got this man that shit was tight.

Flow- King
Punches- King
Content- King
Enjoyment- King
Creativity- King
Vocab- King

Vote- King clearly took this with a much better verse... need i say more

my vote is king
his rap was cool but lack any kind of structure
flow and rhyme was cool but work on that
structure

return tha favor

get sum votes uppin on this shit and i'll return da favour!!
my links are in my sig.

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get uppin this shit man i'll return tha favour

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King - Good spit man, had some sweet multi's in there.. with some hard hitten punches, was fellin your flow bro.

Best Line - Beatin me is a mission impossible and u aint tom cruise, everybody can learn from ure battles…learn how to lose!// (niiiice)

Worst Line - NONE

Picture - Good spit man, hd some alright flow going there.. wasnt feeling your punches as much but they were still pretty tight.

Best Line - NONE (that stood out to me)

Worst Line - Why u wanna step to this, u aint smart, there aint no more kings, so I gotta brighten u up like the president of bling bling.
Yo check this shit it’s a tyranny take over, cuz this cat couldn’t spit dope wit a mouth full of baking soda (wheres the ryme?)

OVERALL - Good Battle, pretty one sided.. King ripped this dude, pic you did you thing to wasnt that bad.. just gotta throw som harder punches in there.. maybe some multi's and work on your flow.

VOTE - King

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119532

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flow - king
punches - king
best line - I’m a end ure rap career with simultaneous explosions that are nuclear blowin ure rear to another fuckin hemisphere
opener - king
finisher king

over all king had a better verse and was more enjoyable to read my vote = king

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flow king
rhyme tie
punches king

vote: King...harder hitting verse


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