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Old 06-01-05, 12:00 AM   #1
Acuity
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Topical Piece Of Week 1 and 2

IP: 73E3 A2A2

Decided by Acuity, DQ and ELemntality

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Drowning In Ink by artĂ-stica~Mente

The cold air lurks around me as I stand in position
With Cold chapped lips and the bruises are not fiction
Bad images flows in my brain, like I was equip with the sea
I felt like was a mirror, knowing on the outside, I bleed
I gasped, As I saw the images un blur and clear…..a fist
With hard knuckles pounding on me, it’s quick I cant resist
I felt like I was trapped in a box, no way out, I took the pain
Every pound, took the wind out of me, tears leak with it man
When its over, like pain attach with glue, it’ll never go away
But tonight will he his last, and time for me to be……..free
As I stood hiding behind the window curtains, as my body
………and my dress soaked with the deadliest color …bleeds


As I opened the door I felt the empty presence reeked around me
My eye sockets went both left and right, rage crept “where is she?”
One step, I felt this awareness in me, telling myself “something not right”
Second step, As flicked the lights on, like an open soul, no one still in sight
Saw this “flat” presence from a tree, written in ink, my hands went hard
It reads “I left” popping veins from my neck, rage, took the letter and discard
With my hands looking like a fist, and rage pumps in me, I put my head down
For thou I wasn’t aware of the presence no more, knowing that I’m alone now
With one movement, I didn’t breathe, with one movement, I didn’t hear
My body hit the table black ink leaks on me, with darkness ending my life
……………………………….............. .................No more I see light clear


As I walked in front of the door, surprise there’s no sirens waling
My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching
Put my hand on the door knob, nervousness roll in me without thinking
My blood leaks with the black ink, no more I will be………aching
One turn from the knob, open, finally with a glimpse of light, I’m free
My blood leaks with the black ink no forever more………..I breathe
As I turned around, see the corpse body, I opened my mouth and said
……………………………….............. .......................B ye honey


1 had rage, the other rage for revenge

Now think who saying "BYE HONEY" The husband or the wife?

G00d luck guessing it.
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