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u first
no crew votes bitin n shit klike dat

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checkin in

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checkin in dude.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......

ima go first cuz i gotta go out drop 18 - 22

all honesty u suck to me, so why bother tryin ya luck newbie,
u pussy whipped....why else would u be stuck to ya mommy.
u cant fuck wit me, and ya punches dont pay rent,
it isnt an accident....gawd u deliberately dont make sense.
this more like a cat fight.....what am i in da battle for,
with all ya wack wordplay....u belong on scrabble boards.
ya gurl wanna lap me, she kno both ways i pack heat,
u dont rap gud at all...get a new hobby forget rap sheets.
lets be serious...even u will be able to tell im da best by far,
ill do you a favor kid...and help stretch your bars.
you have no punches....either way u get ya arms broke,
ill jus ripp you, if i raped you.....i'd hurt ya moms throat.
too many werdz is runnin....ill help u shut ya trap,
ya verse did all the comedy for me....its not much to act.
listen...whats around your waist....its neva a belt,
ill end your text career here....den bitch u can better yaself.
listen ya multis is all u got...im 10x a step over,
this is an occasional meal..dont usually leave a fem leftovers.

9 bars for ya

Check out this cat a real battle wannabee,
He think he all that but he really quite amusing me,
He say he'll chop my verse, well i'll drop him to his knee's,
but im a real big mouthfull and you choke when smoking tree's.
I'll surely make you bleed,
Your too slow to drive miss daisey nevermind MC.
So what we gonna do wid you apart from put you in the trash,
Your style is so obvious like cheech and chong's stash.
You really think ya hitting me... but-this-is-my-bash,
I'll leave scared and fucking freaks like the movie crash.
You might aswell be down under cuz ya styles back to front,
You think your rhyming sharpe but ya lyrics are blunt,
Your broken like evil canevil trying to pull off this stunt,
You wobble like a weeble man too many philli blunts.
The time is now son I clocked your plan of action,
Your spitting like mathmatics but only hitting a small fraction.
Ima spin you around so you spraying from my direction,
Cuz once you here my shit you wont be controlling your erection.
Dont be coming at me played like you always used to chico,
Cuz i'll expose this fake mc...aargh! he-used-to-be-called-RICO......

i wanna c sum votes b4 i go out so get votin

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wow....horrible battle..2 wack verses...elevate like hell, both of ya....

since I'm Here

Vote=mysterie

marvel this isn't audio man, your verse was so screwed up, I saw nothing but metas, and flow was aight but...punches+wordplay are nonexiostent...

mysterie's verse was slightly better, he had some punchlines as opposed to none...so he gets my vote

/\thanks


more voters plz

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aight mysterie got this one pretty easily---he had betta flow and punches---marvel ya verse was weak and had no hard disses at all--ya needa elevate---vote=mysterie---

check my sig-----onee

ima say mysterie takes this, both cats need to elevate, but for the battle at hand mysterie takes it.....

structure-tie
flow-tie
vocab-neither
wordplay-neither
punches-mysterie
personals-tie
overall-mysterie

props to the both of ya, but ima say mysterie takes this......

peace......

uppin 4 votes

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Not a very good battle. Myst and Marvel, you both need to work on your flow, punches, wordplay. You do have good structure though....but that's about it. Myst definitely came harder. Flow was less choppy and had more punches that were hitting harder. Work on wordplay and punches guys. Keep elevatin


Vote ~ Myst

ight first i was sayin myst's verses started of fairly noobish, but the scrabbleboard line was funny tho

but his verse wasnt a killer, still needs elevation
but what shocked me is that marvel came weaker than he did


flow = myst
punches = myst
wordplay = myst
craetivity = myst

vote = myst

elevate the both of u

yo everyone mysterie won this, it was an equal battle, but mysterie came harder in most aspects harder punches, nicer flow