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Old 02-19-04, 12:34 PM   #1
Ambition
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I wont go to prison...

IP: 6387 1717

Its not a mans job to punish me for my crimes. GOD can punish me in his own way. When you put me in prison your taking GOD'S plans in your own hands. No one is meant to be caged up. So any cop who ever think I'll serve a sentence. You'll have no mercful killing.

[B][I]Come and get me/
no one is wit me/
the glock is what simply/
wont stop raining til the motha fuckin chamber is empty/
thinkin I wont fight/
thinkin I wont ride/
think that I wont die for my freedom/
if you a disgrace and thinkin im not right then I dont need em/
sirens and red blue lights is what I fear to see/
the thought of being behind bars is what piercing me/
the base you giving/
cant help you brake out by the weights you lifting/
I dont know man maybe its my way of living/
I aint made for prison/
wanna see the glock or nine niggaz take your picking/
this is ride or die/
so im tellin te judge now I will not serve life/
so police when you step me me man you better be ready to kill/
this aint no light stituation this heavly/
I swear to GOD every minute that passes/
you'll pray to GOD its your only fuckin moment thats last spent.


Tell me what yall think about this piece...I know I kinda started out simple at the start.
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Old 02-19-04, 12:42 PM   #2
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thiz is very simple but u had a nice flow 2 it but u need 2 inprove ur vocab but overall thiz was ok 1
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Old 02-19-04, 01:10 PM   #3
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Thanks

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I wasnt really going for dope just tryna get the point across. But thanks
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Old 02-19-04, 01:22 PM   #4
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oh dont worry fam i got ur point thiz is good u got skillz no doubt 1 can u give me some feed on my new drop itz called My entrance...?
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Old 02-19-04, 03:34 PM   #5
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lookin for some more feedback...show some love
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