Like Tyrets Syndrone victims i 'spit shit' at every chance,
My mouth released profanities sit and watch as i advance,
At a glance, this rap game for sucess and higher finance,
Money got me actin funny, heads spinning like a break dance,
Round and round, pop an asprin, paracetamol and pills,
The shit begins, under my skin, tylynol and fluid spills,
My friend died or was he killed? i couldn't get the carpet clean,
Put the whole thing in quick cycle, broke the wash machine,
I think i've lost my spleen, if you've seen it please return it,
Lost a bag of 'green' so i rolled up the grass and burnt it,
When its lit, i take my hit, hissy fit upon the floor,
Drove a car without a permit sped to the club and killed a whore,
Another hit, shit; I don't remember anymore?
Is that the paranoia kicking in? is that the pow..lice at my door?
Is someone trying to kill me? do they know i did some more?
Drugs and liqour got me off quicker than any man at a flicker
Down a pint of hennesey and i end up feeling sicker
Then a vicar with one leg sitting in a room full of muslims
Fuck this shit, I'm off to bed, to sleep before the floor spins.

...My favorite "female Emcee"..with another dope piece..you amaze me with your wordplay...

wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO

Luv You 2

wow..... impressive

k i gotta give you props... I never heard a girl spit like that... you drop any audio... I'd like to hear it

..after... ..?????

^lol...but yeah this was a nice piece here...you had good structure in this.....the flow was good through out it i thought, it stayed on pretty well in this, flowed good....you had some good vocab....good wordplay like stated before me....had some nice lines in there....overall a nice piece....keep at it.