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Old 09-04-04, 08:40 AM   #1
Daz
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I Expect Feed.

I was walking in blind rage trapped in minds mazes and i..
realised the times changes and how lifes basic..but...
feelings were lying baseless & i felt i was dying faceless..and..
i kept trying to save it..But i failed with the trying i gave it ..and
i just was tryna shake it..but no matter the try i faked it..So..
i felt like flying naked but im really crying awake..and..
theres moments i felt that i was denying that i couldnt take it..
i felt the crying phases of hears sorrows and trna trace it...
I stuck to the sining basic chuz its so hard to for me to face it..Only..
i denied my pride accepted my lies and tried to make it..so..
for all my joy b4 now has all the sorrow to lace it..
tommorrow my sorrows hang on while i desperately try to shake it.. but...
im tired of trying, crynig, relying when i should hate it...
and as i see it i dont believe it and for my sake it..
should not have shattered me w/e it is drives like a stake and..
i question L-O-V-E when reakky i just wanna grace it...
is there no hope for me?..seriously is cupid rascist?..Chuz...
when his arrows peirce my heart he nevers fails to break it...
and it burns and turns me..Seriously maybe he maces..
Lifes not Fair..Justice is corrupt in cases where...
my hearts concerned..appeals arent real...and shattered hearts are pasted..
and love is sweet? but it seems as though ull never get to taste it..
whether they bake it, roast it, toast it, or try to stake it..
its out of my reach and i already tried to take it...
and whether your black, on crack, spanish or caucasion..
theres only one way to love in any nation..
it leads to frustration and many months of aggravation..
but if its lovely everything has a bad sensation...
and tryna find it will lead to broken hearts and mass dating..
so no matter how long u search you'll always end up last waitin..
so take it slow, go, but just sit back and laugh as u pace it..
as for now wow..my heart just needs to be patient..
so as i realised real eyes lead to my lags in sensations...
i wanna kill guys but it wont clear up my bad relations..just...
trying to do it is crazy so maybe ill grab to datin...
still as i sit here im sad and as mad as satan..
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Old 09-04-04, 01:30 PM   #2
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I like this piece u should start gettin on the mic it would sound sick wit a good beat
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Old 09-04-04, 10:50 PM   #4
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word Up holmes..UP
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Old 09-04-04, 11:53 PM   #5
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wow, great drop, nice flow, i agree with these fellas, would be an amazing spit for audio, good job on this......1
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Old 09-06-04, 12:36 AM   #6
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good job nice flow keep workin hard u gonna be SICK...
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Old 09-23-04, 06:51 PM   #7
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up.
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