yo i got skillz to eat KFC fried chiken/
Tastes so good I be finger lickin'/
The clothes I where are just so cool/
At least that's what my teachers say at school/
ya'll bitches that can't throw pitches/
Diggin Ditches Santa Clause At Cristmas///

Juss Fuckin wit ya'll
Check.....

Maximized illousions causing destressed Replacements/
Vanishing memory of those who deny my greatness/
Cuz my Speeches dive deeper than scientific thesis/
Smashin faces and leaving trails of skeletal peices/
I am hip hop so if i ever bite a rhyme/
I'm taking back whats rightfully mine/

Short and Simple.....kind of

what ya'll think for a first post?

it wasnt bad.... but u need to use a multi syllable flow and some punchlines... the flow was pretty good though.. not the best ever though :P

Hey, can you post up who you replied to?
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Thanks Man.

yeah the flow was good, but the thing was pretty basic, it read like a poem, which isnt bad but with the length, i dunno. and your vocab needs expanded, aight...Pc

Aight Coo coo

nope this verse aint on my level of flow

what????????????????????Where iis the topic????Where's the wordplay????It sounds like a KFC advert..........Elavate Bruv

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Erm Best flow ever is the name of this thread... an no that wasn't no greatness... why's it so short an what's with droppin' a open mic FOR A JOKE... if you ever post again come harder or don't post at all... I recomend you this thread...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=57526