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ayo dark, im gona leave u in darkness, your so scary u look like the lochness/
this fucker don't understand me, i'll swell you up to the brim with swelled up glands flameing/
this woman can be put to the test, cuz he can't cope with the rapping of stress./
ur such a mess like a petecide, on top of your mumma 24-7 giving your mum a ride/
this bitch was blinde at birth, his muthas clit hole was so small, it ripped eyes out of sockets before born/
this world could do with out you, my hands gonna be wrapped around you/
chokeing your skinny throat ringing it, then to be phycotic catupult it at a human target spot/
im always there invisabily slapping you, even when im dead a pulterguise hittin through you/
i'll write on a peice of paper, send it to your address, filled with creepy crawlys walking all ova you in spite/
this bitch has been infested, and got herbies, needs to be tested/

If your Popa Doc.. U could call me Eminem..
This aint 8-mile But Sure as hell we can pretend

Your Flow was good, but it didn't make sense
Now i'ma hit u up wit dat ni66a i signed Named--> 50 Cent

By the time i'm DOne your gunna need a Name Change..
Cause Popa Doc Will Be Locked my My Murderous Saying

I won you already Juss Drop Ya KeyBoard
Like Popa DOc When he Lost... n got told "Fuck da Freeworld"

It's Done It's Over.. Darrk Came out on top
By Now u Feel like Chedda. Whne he Poped himself with His GLock

papa doc u had some good punchs and decent flow but my vote goes to darrk because his punchs, opener, and closing were better.

v/darrk

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Uppin 4 Votes.. COme on Yall...

Darrk - Best I seen from you man.. good flow goin on.. and you had some good punches in there and personals.

Best Line - It's Done It's Over.. Darrk Came out on top
By Now u Feel like Chedda. Whne he Poped himself with His GLock (niice punch and endin)

Worst Line - By the time i'm DOne your gunna need a Name Change..
Cause Popa Doc Will Be Locked my My Murderous Saying (change and sayin?..)

poppa Doc - iight spit man, your flow was off... but you had some iight punches in there.

Best Line - this bitch has been infested, and got herbies, needs to be tested/

Worst Line - ayo dark, im gona leave u in darkness, your so scary u look like the lochness/
this fucker don't understand me, i'll swell you up to the brim with swelled up glands flameing/ (weak start)

OVERALL - Alright battle, best I seen from Darrk.. so I gotta vote for him.. his punches were better and he finally got some flow goin on. Poppa.. you need to work on flow and rymes.. your punches were iight.. but most of em didnt ryme. Darrk man.. also make sure the last word on each line rymes.. will give you more impact.

VOTE - Darrk

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123020

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darkkkk wooped dat ass he had some good ass punches and mutiles he also had damm good wordplay and his flow was really tight papa needs more work on his punches and wordplay in order to win battles but both of you can keep elevating and get better

ma vote goes to darkk

Uppin 4 VOtes

COme on people i'll return da favor

upppin 4 votes holla i'll return da favor

i would like to get more votes....................