I'm workin on our song you sent me. Can you shorten your verse by roughly 5 bars? It should end at around the 49 second mark so i can put the hook where the beat breaks down. After that there is a verse open I'm gonna take the 3rd verse. Anyone interested in the second verse? Send me your accapellas of all your layers seperatley when your done and I'll mix it all at the proper levels. Here's the hook its called "We The Best"


We the best yes check the rhymes
Dont test treat these cats like a vet who's next in line
Rush us with that ruckus I will clutch the nine
Can't touch us I will bust like its Hammer Time
We the best tell Khaled fall behind
We the best yes the Syndicate of Chryme
Chryme chryme chryme
Chryme chryme chryme

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

ill work on shortening tommarrow, the song only has room for two verses though

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"the loudest one in the room is the weakest"- frank lucas..

That hooks wack

Its got plenty room for 3. Load it into cool edit and change the view to bars instead of seconds.

4 bar intro
16 bar verse
8 bar hook
12 bar verse (8 bars full beat 6 bars broken down)
8 bar hook
16 bar verse
8 bar hook
4 bar outro

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

first,who wrote the hook, second if thats the raising the bar track it onlyhas 2 verses

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C.S.

...Is to have Served Your Faction

third why did u post this here, fourth why did all of the fam have to look at this

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C.S.

...Is to have Served Your Faction

im not going to be in this..and i have not hear the beat..but that hook does not seem C.S. like ..but then again no one listens to me haha

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Ill write the hook for whoevers in this.

we slap hands, like pansy partys
CS .. next rhymes bacardi
slap my hand,, ohhh please slap it good
yeh, CS, call me car bonnet, cause im hood


fuck Im dope.

some things may not be as they apear most writtens dont look good till made audio. look at wayne.. well ok bad example but if you read his lyrics you'd think its yung medikated

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU