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07-23-03, 09:11 PM | #1 | |||||||
New to RB
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New Song
IP: AB39 2DBE
about: it's mainly about freestyling. I know it seem slike a battle verse but that's what i want..to feel like i'm confronting you.
Beat: i made the beat. Song: The Tittle is "Cipher." http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/s...cbeatsmusic.htm Lyrics: Cipher I start to gather people all around Because the whole atmosphere in a circle is round If I have the time limit I’ll give you the whole amount My punches are the only one that count You can feel the flow of my sound Swimming with intellectuals that could never drown The freestyle is diverse with many variety That gets the bets of me words are the recipe If you call me out you have to go first Be ready to explode with stars about to burst Hungry for a victim that’s why I got to obey my thirst I hear the first word that you be free My counters are set lock and load ready I see some lines coming through me with multiple artillery It’s like your words are the force of military I can tell you attacking my appearance No peer pressure that my looks will blend in any circumstance But later on your faith will rest in my hands. Chorus 2x Keep freestyling no matter what it takes Keep respecting that good and the hate Go to the next phase and keep the faith After your done just take a break It’s my turn to blaze to get your ass on fire With overload air pressure to explode your tire The desire to keep going is what you came to inspire Like art I’m hitting you with multiple abstract A de rail train on instrumental you couldn’t stay on track I’m the darker side of you also hitting you on the back Also making the earth quake to make you crack Then attract your mind to set explosive like a surprise attack Isolate you to cover with force like a wolf pack I’m already tearing you to pieces committing massacre Killing you’re verses invincible not knowing the attacker The crowds is giving me their whole energy Didn’t I tell you should be ready for my victory Cause I be killing every one of your anatomy Even if I gave you super soaker you couldn’t start blasting me You already know its over and done for Shoot… my whole verse got you control down to the core But at the end you’re always hungry for more |
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07-24-03, 04:24 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: D251 FCF5
this wasnt that impressive, your voice got irritating after a while and you mumble in some areas..
ovrall: 5.1/10 |
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07-24-03, 09:36 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 4935 0DF0
OH MY GOODNESS, That was lyrical trash, Take your entire hard drive and waste it, and burn the mic you claim to spit on. Your voice sounded like a wack ass white boy, You sound like a wack ass white boy, Your lyrics are like a wack ass white boys. I think your just a wack ass white boy. If your black you'll suprise the shit out of me. But its not about race dude, that shit SUCKED. One word of advice is WRITE TO THE BEAT. Its all about flow man.
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