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Old 07-23-03, 09:11 PM   #1
Z3n1th
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New Song

IP: AB39 2DBE

about: it's mainly about freestyling. I know it seem slike a battle verse but that's what i want..to feel like i'm confronting you.
Beat: i made the beat.
Song: The Tittle is "Cipher."

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/s...cbeatsmusic.htm

Lyrics:
Cipher
I start to gather people all around
Because the whole atmosphere in a circle is round
If I have the time limit I’ll give you the whole amount
My punches are the only one that count
You can feel the flow of my sound
Swimming with intellectuals that could never drown
The freestyle is diverse with many variety
That gets the bets of me words are the recipe
If you call me out you have to go first
Be ready to explode with stars about to burst
Hungry for a victim that’s why I got to obey my thirst
I hear the first word that you be free
My counters are set lock and load ready
I see some lines coming through me with multiple artillery
It’s like your words are the force of military
I can tell you attacking my appearance
No peer pressure that my looks will blend in any circumstance
But later on your faith will rest in my hands.
Chorus 2x
Keep freestyling no matter what it takes
Keep respecting that good and the hate
Go to the next phase and keep the faith
After your done just take a break


It’s my turn to blaze to get your ass on fire
With overload air pressure to explode your tire
The desire to keep going is what you came to inspire
Like art I’m hitting you with multiple abstract
A de rail train on instrumental you couldn’t stay on track
I’m the darker side of you also hitting you on the back
Also making the earth quake to make you crack
Then attract your mind to set explosive like a surprise attack
Isolate you to cover with force like a wolf pack
I’m already tearing you to pieces committing massacre
Killing you’re verses invincible not knowing the attacker
The crowds is giving me their whole energy
Didn’t I tell you should be ready for my victory
Cause I be killing every one of your anatomy
Even if I gave you super soaker you couldn’t start blasting me
You already know its over and done for
Shoot… my whole verse got you control down to the core
But at the end you’re always hungry for more
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Old 07-24-03, 04:24 AM   #2
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this wasnt that impressive, your voice got irritating after a while and you mumble in some areas..

ovrall: 5.1/10
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Old 07-24-03, 09:36 AM   #3
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OH MY GOODNESS, That was lyrical trash, Take your entire hard drive and waste it, and burn the mic you claim to spit on. Your voice sounded like a wack ass white boy, You sound like a wack ass white boy, Your lyrics are like a wack ass white boys. I think your just a wack ass white boy. If your black you'll suprise the shit out of me. But its not about race dude, that shit SUCKED. One word of advice is WRITE TO THE BEAT. Its all about flow man.
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