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I want life(be open minded)
IP: 98E1 D794
Again be open minded
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...sticatmusic.htm http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?AID=235858&T=3402 here's the lyrics(some parts are left out of the song or diffrent) Stagnant but vibrant with little affection/ Migraines dull my dept perception/ To my recollection life’s lessons don’t lessen my aggression/ Resentment is testing my morals essence/ Festering ideas manifest into plots formed from hatred/ Adjacent to love saturated in memories of being down graded/ Being sedated made native belief vagrant/ From heart to head from a greenery fragrance/ I just want freed from this mental enslavement/ Awoke on the pavement/ Days spent in amazement/ Paranoid by illusive agents/ Felt I was put in Surveillances/ From staying bent/ Now lost in a cadence/ In the Paranormal dimension/ An extension of suspension/ Lithless I visit interventions/ Of earth and eternal wisdom/ Fabricated outlook covering cataclysm/ Organism movements deform along with the rhythm/ Vulgar ogres threaten my stability/ When I’m half trapped in tranquility/ Sense enhanced along with agility/ Said what the fuck is responsibility/ Chronic progressive synthetic love is fulfilling me/ Passer bye’s look in my eyes/ Questioning my mental state of mind/ Ranting I’m traumatized/ Compromised I died inside/ And I’m just trying to find something more divine/ Than blind mankind’s never exhilarating design/ Then a realization paced in and stated/ You’re forsaken but your soul is eternally awakened/ I miss life/ And I miss love/ Baffled by an identity crisis From hallucinogenic drugs/ I want life And I want love/ Can’t find myself/ I’ve had enough/ I’ve had enough/ Now lectures became reverberated instantly/ An entity in need of empathy becomes his worst enemy/ Searching for serenity receive no sympathy/ I’ve a lost my identity/ Blossomed fully and erected a soul so self-confident/ No longer where my days monotonous/ Cautious of synthetic friends nonsense/ They’re lost in astonishment/ Replied they lost it/ Half nauseous and frail but I keep a steady pace/ Triptameans mangle this fiend’s face/ I told him this is not your place/ What happen when your dreams where being chased/ They where replaced with toxicated days/ What a waste to have such talent just to get thrown off balance/ Probably a malice/ How family made your emotions callused/ Haunted by sleep paralysis/ So twisted the Ph.D. couldn’t make an analysis/ Demented by significant unstructured goals/ Now he loves to loathe/ Internally erodes/ An great realization awoke stating this is the life you chose/ Time froze and I hold one single expression/ A face full of affection/ Amazed I come to realize it was my mere reflection/ A mental projection/ Stating I must make some corrections/ To help my life’s direction/ I fall into cardiac arrest as time elapsed/ Respiratory system collapsed/ Mapped out mental attacks to throw me in the past/ And dim my vision’s contrast has took its last stab/ I stand firm in what I believe in and what I need to succeed/ Just be free mentally from the bad side of me/ Now I’m one with sobriety/ Now life honestly holds a little more variety/ I miss life/ And I miss love/ Baffled by an identity crisis From hallucinogenic drugs/ I want life And I want love/ Can’t find myself/ I’ve had enough/ I’ve had enough/ I’ve come to a conclusion life is a drug in it’s self/ So if you abuse a substance and damage your health/ Your lifeless
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ArtistiCat Cats wanna criticize with a weak basis of judgement So if your a lame ass underground cat dont reply to my topics(you know who you are) ![]() ![]() get at me here Acidplanet Soundclick Last edited by thephilosopher : 02-01-04 at 12:43 PM. |
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IP: 98E1 D794
Can i get some feed back
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ArtistiCat Cats wanna criticize with a weak basis of judgement So if your a lame ass underground cat dont reply to my topics(you know who you are) ![]() ![]() get at me here Acidplanet Soundclick |
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I'd give u feedback man, but it says that I have to register or log in to see ur shit...and ur on a site that not many kats use, I suggest putting ur tracks up at Soundclick or Dmusic...
peace
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this one is on sounclick now
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Check it out now
come on damn
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IP: CB28 E7E2
HAHAHAHA BEST SONG EVER YOUR GOING SOMEWHERE KID HAHAHAHAHA
i mean, its alright, try to get better ![]()
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Wow, I guess some of us have a different view of rap than others.
Q-tip "breathe and stop" beat, destroyed with a piano and string loop that is off key horribley. Your not even spitting on beat, if you was doing that then I could say this is simply abstract, but your not on beat, so all you are doing is screaming over a beat. no hate. .OnE.
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![]() ![]() Originally Posted by sdizzle any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best |
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Yeah but I was trying to get a message a cross
Like it says be open minded and I was on beat most times One more thing That is my original beat
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