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Old 06-14-04, 10:32 PM   #1
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Crew Tag Battle: A.I.: DeLeon & The Great Harold Vs Mafioso: E-Dubz and DaCROZofHB

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this is how its going down.....

house rules
and no crew votes.......Voters: ya need 250 posts

Verses: each person can do a 20 line verse dissin each member
or 2 10 line verse's for each member...


verses due by Weds night by 8:30 p.m

check in so I know your gonna show

Team 1: A.I.: DeLeon & The Great Harold

Team 2: Mafioso: E-Dubz and DaCROZofHB
 
Old 06-14-04, 11:41 PM   #2
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checkin in..i'll drop b4 weds night
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Old 06-14-04, 11:44 PM   #3
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This should be in the Crew battles section.
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Old 06-15-04, 02:25 AM   #4
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u niggaz cant harm me im strapped wit black like a slave in a car seat
workin u harder on both feet gettin u on both knees when yo doe freeze
i'll have to speak slow just so u can keep up to my flow
u blow kisses to da net like jason, kidd u failed at shootin when i gave u a free throw
u cant spar* me u thought that air force ones was made in the army
de-le-on think he spit hotter then fire, he frozen like **spree-may, son
u on a chase fo the cake cuz the only time u holding weight is on yo waist like a sumo wrestler
u dont deserve to be in the rap game, dont even got a real rap name believe
its that strange how yo brain restrains from complex strains
u breath harder than darth vador, but i can help you i'll be your savior
shoot u till yo bodies all severed an tapered, smoked yo vapor
im shakespear compared to ur nursery rhymes
its like i put my watch on my belt cuz ur a waist of my time
nigga im glad u were looking fo a challenge
cuz ima beat u like a horny nigga tossin his salad
u thought u was on top now u gettin knocked out like Jones
cuz yo rhymes r more weak then fractured bones

*spar-trainin for boxing..exhibition fight
**latrell sprewell..

iight theres my verse..i had to drop that b4 i left tomoro mornin
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Old 06-15-04, 06:21 PM   #5
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Croz and Dubz come up on ya HARD like 8 shots of Liquor/
Harold is a Fuckin Faggot, plays wit so much nuts Niggas nickname is Snickers/
Cant nobody spit Sicker, Im da True Nigga/
Get over yoself, yo shit aint fuckin Authen-tik/
Blows rearrange yo penis, Hoes think you fucked up Gene-tiks/
Dis nigga bitin others mo than a Tyson Fight Bout/
First thought I should be scared when he said Ima Knock yo Lights Out/
Walked in my room at 3am pitch black, felt somethin tryin to tear My ass Out/
Now I know wat dis Elton John wannabe is All About/
Mafioso Crew, da fuckin real 1-2 punch like Ben and Rasheed/
9mm bullets go in and out yo body, like you Horny Pussy/
I aint Fitty but "Don't Push Me"
Nigga thought he could JUGGLE our rhymes, cuz he da best at TOSSIN Tooshi/
 
Old 06-16-04, 11:17 AM   #6
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Im rusty as fuck…but you kno what…kids like you…means I can take my pre written dope lines…and save em…for sumone worthy

Me and dee Rock well…reppin AI and always cumin first,
While these kids spit and suck….like blowjobs in reverse.
We all know dubz is pussy…I already put fear in the hoe,
But ill admit his skills equal mine………..about a year ago.
but after we be kool………….eventually the beef will fade,
and the only bad blood between us…………………………….
……………………….…...will be the fact that CROZ has aids.
^sorry to stab at ur sexuality…………but the fact is dood
we all have heard u 2 have tagged before…………………..
…………………………………….on Dubz Dad in the bedroom.
Get off ur e-thug tip……….. ur ghetto act we all see thru,
Coz truth is..puberty..is the only struggle u’ve been thru.
These kids can stop frontin…their tuffness is just bluffin,
Coz im a hill of illness and their a mountain………………...
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.


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Old 06-16-04, 11:36 AM   #7
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bringin back the natural form of violence?

kids and their games these days

Dont even got to come hard with them......
Intro:
Into the center like bad oil we choke your engine....
these fake kids sportin A&F and wearin rainbow stickers..
They even more confused when you ask they gender...
they told you not to battle us..... we snatch up your arms
still wanted it so ya gettin bitchslapped with ya palms..ha ha get it ha ha


Rapin the dead by the only way ya takin a Head
and puttin something in a case?...plz kids ya only makin ya bed
Mafia Life? nah we opposite..A.I blast glocks ya'll scared of heaterz
we the all star team.....
but no doubt ya'll doin a good job as the mascot and cheerleaders
beat us? Can ya'll VISON it NOPE how you gone spit when I send a couple hit’s-to-your-throat?
And this battle’s like comic view re runs cuz I’m sick of these jokes
And I know your whole crew stress-me
cuz we the best-b..... and your leader DON
No Damn king only Crown he deserves is for some messed-teeth…ya’ll wanna press-me like channel 3 but I wreck-peeps and Great Harold will tell you This Tag Team is like homicidal tennis players we'll try and kill you over some net-beef....lol
so ya’ll better recycle some past-written’s or leave needing mad stitching I’m running the game you should see how AI's stats-risen…
now the whole RB just watch as i laugh…pissing on you 2 cat’s spitting just to prove once and for all that Mafioso washed like baptism's...
 
Old 06-16-04, 12:25 PM   #8
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aight battle

AI won this hands down.....................

TEAM 1 [AI] = u had nice flows to ure verse but harold had a better one than u de cuz his lines weren't too stretched so they flowed better. both y'all came with some nice punches and personals that ripped these two cats easy. there wasn't much for creativity, just some basic spits but there was a little originality in ure drops. harold, the thing with ure drop was that u were using .......................for filler which is not good. deleon came the stronger out of the two of u but overall u both came gud.

TEAM 2 [MAFIAOSO] = both of u came weak, no hate just statin the truth. u had short lines followed by stretched lines which gave u a real choppy flow throughout both verses. punches were there and personals but they were mainly pretty weak and some played concepts. u lacked in the originality and creativity with just some basic wordplay mainly. i think that e-dubz came better but neither one of u came close to deleon or harold. both y'all need to elevate ure game, work on ure flow for starters and then improve ure punches and personals!!

V/ Team AI
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Old 06-16-04, 03:11 PM   #9
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Haha....my god this was such a one sided battle...Team A.I had this, no question about it, and both emceez on A.I spit half-assed. Haha at Miafaso team...no punches worth mentioning at all...both structures fucked...both flow was horrible...

A.I did spit good even tho they weren't really trying. Punches, flow, structure especially from The Great Harold, was all tite...nice drops from both of you.

Vote- A.I takes this no doubt.
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Old 06-16-04, 03:12 PM   #10
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I Got tHe Same Feelingz As King derre
AI


Aight its like this

~ [ MAFIOSO - EDUBZ- DACROZ
Yall stinked out there u need to improve you're Vocab Punches Personels overall IMPROVE Everything Elavate u need to Improve then u battle them i still think u cant pull the win off but u guys Tryed and thats all good but u lacked Complexity in this Battle u elavate Try again and i think u get a 6 For Good Effort ..... ....


~ [ A.I The Great Harold-DeLeon

You Guyz Killed it up in here Punches off the Hook and DeLEon that Color u write in hurts ma Eye lol besides that GoOd Personels Harold Nice STRUCTURE Harlold and i gotta Give DelEon the Punches and Flow his shit was nice u guys where the improved 1s of this battle thats why i gotta give it to ya i give ya good scor 8.4/10

V/ ~ [ A.I The Great Harold - DeLeaon
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Old 06-16-04, 03:18 PM   #11
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This was a joke... AI got this for sure.. Way better punches personals structure vocab basically everything.. This wasnt even fair..

Ripped apart.. Perfect structure by harold... deleon you had good punches and everything...


Vote - AI BECAUSE THEY RIPPED IT UP..
 
Old 06-16-04, 04:44 PM   #12
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aight aight......uppin for that last vote.......to close this out
 
Old 06-16-04, 07:38 PM   #13
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TEAM 1...A.I: ok First Harold you did very well from start to finish you
ripped dem to shreds bar count and flow were both on point nice vocab
you used it well creativity & originality was both aight my fav punch
from you in this drop was as well the opener:

"Me and dee Rock well…reppin AI and always cumin first,
While these kids spit and suck….like blowjobs in reverse."

OK DeLeon in my opinion you had a lil better verse liked the intro.....
ok your opener was aight flow & bar count were aight not your
greatest vocab was good, creativity & originality on point............

TEAM 2...Mafioso: OK first up E-Dubz ok....well you didn't come
hard at all your punches weren't good period & your flow was just
decent not the best....creativity & originality not there in my opinion....
OK....CROZ nope not enough effort to win this battle your flow was
aight not the best & your punches weren't hitting hard...........

vote goes to: A.I. Crew- DeLeon & The Great Harold
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