17 lines max...
no recycled or bitten lines...
you know the rest....

Check in.. you go first

~Nise~

yo, nise. de3p checkin in. haha first battle for both of us. somethins wack wit this. its only lettin write 100 characters or more for mai check in. but w/e. good luck man

checken in.....drop your verse and i'll hit you back...
first battle should be a good one...good luck kid...

~.Nise.~

yo.. yo... hes a newb, im a newb, we all newbie rappin
havent u seen mai cyphas? why do u choose to battle
this dood is ass-whipped, hes not standin a chance
he can only handle to dance with his fuckin hands in his pants
but i wont ramble and rant, time to get down to business
because my sound gets twisted when im around these bitches
these rounds im spittin at this dood, call yourself nise
but ill show you some niceness when i maul ya ass twice
pause ya wack rhymes , proceed to rewind ya cd
do my eyes decieve me or is this dime just weak b?
so ya feelin fine? no weak knees? time to give u ya medicine
maybe some cyanide, makin u rhyme right, rappin betta man
but im ahead again, look it, my votes pilin' up jus right now
pipe down, like a dinosaur, go extinct and get wiped out
now ive knocked ya lights out, im out, adios good night now

aiight, ur turn man

dammit, i coulda done better on that. oh well, its only mai first rap battle. ill have more ahead of me haha

A-ight yo....

Place the gloc to de3p's top then pop
Watch peices of his brain drop turn'em to slop,
Kid's silly if he think I'ma stop, you luke warm while I'm hot
I keeps it locked, known to hit a newb fast
Nise bout to leave de3p stiff like wearen a body cast
From what's loaded in my shoties shaft
de3p bout to end up in that black body bag
Bloodstains on my carpet from his body bein' dragged
Oh shit, he throwen in that white flag, his skills ain't sharp
For a start I'll cut his neck apart
Fucken see his heart depart, from his chest turn'em to a mess
Tryen to test the best, but don't you know I'm dirty fresh
And I'm ~.Nise.~, your flows bitter while my flow be spice
Throw ya around like some dice...treat you like a hacky sack
Kick you in ya teeth to let you know I ain't haven that
Your like paddy cake while I'm always rappen phat...

good stuff...

It's Nise

niice nise, good shit man. lets let the people vote on it. good battle man, maybe we can battle again when we become veterans.
- de3p

cmon people, we need votes here!! UPPPPPPPPPIINNNNNNNNNNN!!!! VOTE VOTE VOTE!! gotta see which newb takes his first victory

People....can we get some votes? Holla back and help us out...Yeah de3p...I'll see you in the future... Uppin for votes...

Nise

I see people be viewen the battle, but nobody be helpen us out with the votes...UPPIN ^^^..holla

Nise

Ight, This is a noob battle so I'll cut u both some slack

so, with that being said,
I felt dat Nise came harder on this and the other man didnt seem determined to win, wasnt focusing on dissing his opponent, feel me?

Vote = Nise

good look.......still uppin for votes.....holla people....

I'm up 1-0....first to five takes it...

Nise

Uppin............................................. .................................................. ............................

Nise