shadowboxing the invisible opponent,
This space I own it, introducing the proponent

time I slow it, taking control of the elements
circumventing irrelevance in to the voice excellence

No time for sediments, only the purest form exposed
This is the time for battle now that the powers have been bestowed

Upon the common man, through the fists of tired hands
Through the eyes of common sense and the hold of sturdy land

Through the span of modern time words written in cursive lines
at the price of many lives and the loss of many spines

Unpunished crimes committed are not a crime at all
Till the piper wades his way through the blood of those who fall

And decides the fate of those who chose the beaten path
And spare the ones who didn’t with life after the aftermath

You can do the math for days and become a slave to the equations
Or follow what you believe and fight against the man’s persuasion

The Invasion has begun, the lines of war now set in stone
We fight to live another day but we will never make it home


JOIN THE ARMY
HAHA YEA RIGHT

Unpunished crimes committed are not a crime at all
Till the piper wades his way through the blood of those who fall

And decides the fate of those who chose the beaten path
And spare the ones who didn’t with life after the aftermath


the shit man

loved this peace, theres no place for a man in the army
peep these Kapone Productions

Bone Thugs Style

Unpunished crimes committed are not a crime at all
Till the piper wades his way through the blood of those who fall

The Invasion has begun, the lines of war now set in stone
We fight to live another day but we will never make it home

maaan, much props and respect
i cant believe such an incredible piece is being slept on
keep spittin ill be here replying

Where you at 9 heres some of my best haha thanks for those who reply

nice drop cat, had the aesop rock feel to it(if thats what you is sounding like nahmean haha,if not tell me ),im a big fan of that guy,damn shit was nice last few bars were the best out cat,nice drop foreal.peep my shit on open mic,directions,lookin for feeddback nahmean,keep spitting cat.
bismillah

up up and yea...

very nice flow... more like an audio type of drop... try to put this to a beat

i write everything to a beat or else it would flow

come on 9 u have to peep this

nice.. I liked the multis and flow of this joint... some deep thoughts also made it kinda enjoyable.. you kept my attention the whole way, usually I read about half then respond to that..

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thanks yo. haha your right abour that! i normally do the same. some of the stuff on here is so bland i just head straight for the comment box

nice, yea it would be better wit a beat

nice easy flow, some good content in spots,
just a nice easy rhyme to read, i enjoyed it fasho

lol... Thanks for the honorable mentions... lol... you know I have to peep your shit... I just got on late today, I had to work some overtime...

ok, to the workings of this... it had incredible flow and great content. Everyone has quoted the best verses so I'll leave it at that although I liked the whole thing I loved the "never make it home" combination... that was ill. But damn, you just posted this today and already got 9 replies?... good job. Man, you need to start posting more often and stuff but it's good to have you grace the forum as often as you do... keep doing this shit and you'll go far...

pz