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AITZ | 0 | 0% | |
Clown | 5 | 100.00% | |
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09-21-04, 08:14 AM | #1 | |
Banned: Cheating
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Clown vs AITZ
IP: B274 5338
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6 - 8Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no d/r no hate les go biach Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-24-04 at 08:14 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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09-21-04, 08:29 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 63C7 B683
AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 08:29 AM.
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09-21-04, 08:34 AM | #3 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 63C7 B683
clown? wat sort of name is that//
wat u tryin to make me a heart attack// ill b sitten back watchen u clown around// but next summer if im in ur town it will b wit a shotty,nine and a desert E// finally i am the 1 2 b not easy ur lyrics r 2 greasy/ wack ass rapin u up in grease proof papper then burn u and ash u in the neighbours yard so dont start im a aussie and representing australian warning yall i aint no failya |
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09-21-04, 04:01 PM | #4 | |
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IP: EE35 6341
Clown has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 04:01 PM.
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09-21-04, 04:32 PM | #5 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: EE35 6341
yo dis my 1st battle so here my shit
U alredy in debt, battlin me is payin money u cant spend/ its like a white guy fightin a thug, nigga, u cant win/ wat tha fuck,0-4, your dam record says it all/ u talk shit like toiletes, but wat about when leads envolved/ wat the fucks a Aitz?no motha fucka a winna u aint/ i may be da clown but u da one bleedin da paint/ No one likes your spitz but ill let u choke/ an let u know dat unlike u and bush, i dont gotta beg 4 votes/ |
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09-21-04, 07:06 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: EE44 269B
upp for votes
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09-21-04, 07:17 PM | #7 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 93AF 0EB2
Voted For: Clown
ok, this was a weak ass battle gotta give this to clown though for not completely putting me to sleep. clown you had some kind of structure going on and a decent flow, a few weak punches, best line was the bleedin paint line. closer was aight for this battle AITZ, go work on your shit, you were apparently missing some words cuz some of your shit just straight up didnt make sense, then at the end i guess you got distracted and started writin a sentence, what the fuck was that? that shit was horrible
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09-21-04, 07:19 PM | #8 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Clown
yo to tell you tha truth clown got this one he had it goin came harder better rhymes no doubt both had a good structure didnt really see no personals overall clown came at it |
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09-21-04, 07:26 PM | #9 |
..Friends Change..
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IP: 10D2 DA0C
Voted For: Clown
weak newb battle punches- Clown all of yours were harder personals- Clown yours were harder hittin multis- neither of ya had em metas- Clown cuz u just had better ones word play- AITZ, cuz of one line flow- Clown cuz u kept it goin smoothly Clown u had better punches, and personals, but u need to elevate. try some wordplay 2. AIDS i mean AITZ haha my bad. seriously though u need to elevate horribly, weak punches, weak personal, and flow wuz off. also work on wordplay. Clown: "wat the fucks a Aitz?no motha fucka a winna u aint/ i may be da clown but u da one bleedin da paint/" ok punch, re word it and its a decent punch. AITZ: "ill b sitten back watchen u clown around// but next summer if im in ur town it will b wit a shotty,nine and a desert E// " one thing dude u gotta make it rhyme, and this verse wuz y u got word play, "clown around" v/clown |
09-21-04, 09:23 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3BDD 17CF
uppin for 2 more votes
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09-21-04, 11:15 PM | #11 | |
Lyrical Prosperity
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IP: D078 09F0
Voted For: Clown
vote to clown, flow = clown, punches equal aitz, beggining = and ending clown, good job, |
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09-22-04, 01:08 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 1EDC 673C
Voted For: Clown
i votein for clown cuz hthis was a good first battle for him but his opponent wasnt muchof a chanllege, his shit was funn and had some good meta4's structure was good and flow was on piont, you almost didnt get it cuz im white and that made me feel retarted kid, ive beaten at least on of evey race and one a every race got me at a time
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