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Old 08-08-06, 06:39 PM   #1
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Repost. -_-

The Cause is a group just created. It consists of me and Young Profit.

Beat is unknown. Tony Self sent it to me a while ago.

Everything in this song is split. Hooks and verses.

Peep it and I will return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476

I will get my last link...I'm going to peep Tha Q's song, so don't get your panties in a knot Amanda. :P
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Old 08-08-06, 07:13 PM   #2
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yea...Cho and I used this beat before...brings back memories


beat is hot

ridin the beat nicely...need a touch more inflections in the delivery...other than that, it's well delivered...But, are there like 4 people rapping?


Vocal quality is too varied, which is understandable considering you all mixed this with different mics/techniques...

I dunno if I'm feeling the switch-offs...It's weird cuz the voices are distinct, but not enough to pull off a 4x4 type flow.


Slick sounding track that needs more direction and focus.

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Old 08-08-06, 08:19 PM   #3
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Old 08-08-06, 08:54 PM   #4
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Listen'n....
Beats nice....

1st: Couldnt tell how many people were spittin' the punch in's seem like 2 different people...but its ok though....Mix coulda bin better...over-all flow is good...
Hook: Not feelin' thats just my opinion not that its bad
2nd: Same as first....

Over-all not a bad track dog...need to work on the mixin' a lil bit...the multies was off...like y'all just rushed it together an didnt take much time on it...but other than though good luck wit "The Cause" hope to see more drops from y'all....my ratin' 4.5/10 keep doin what y'all an keep it 100 holla back 1
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Old 08-10-06, 11:37 AM   #5
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Thanks for the feed.

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Old 08-10-06, 01:08 PM   #7
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fken love the beat, wow where did you find it???? hook is eumm i dunno, could be better, but still good,fuck where did you get this beat???first verse is dope, nice ennuie,second cat's flow is not bad, pretty good, could use a lil bit more emotion, really short verse, second verse starts off dope, then ennuie is dope, reminds me of somethin but dont remember what, dope song, keep droping,

PS: Where did you get this beat!!!
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Old 08-10-06, 04:26 PM   #8
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this beat is tight i remember wayyyyyyy back when i sent it i gotta say im not really feelin the hook all that much i havent heard u much lately i like ya voice but just on more deep tracks over al ide say lim def outshined on this keep it goinnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 08-10-06, 06:05 PM   #9
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okay..typing as I listen...not feeling beat...sounds very comperized an overly generic...whoever spit first...wasn't feeling his flow, his delivery was koo lyrically club oriented nothing to fret over...ok 2nd verse flow is better goes wit beat but the delivery is blan as hell...no emotion whatsoever...hook...wasn't feeling you need to layer it more an it needed a distinct catch phrase with a track of this nature hook is EVERYTHING!!!an yall missed it here...2nd verse is same as first..one dude had the delivery, one had the flow...I ono man I feel you most on introspective shit limited...club shit jus doesn't seem to be you ya kno what I'm saying.

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Old 08-11-06, 12:18 PM   #10
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i dont like the beat...nah nah..i cant dance to this!its no hardcore rap...


verse..okay lyrics are just three..yeah they made sense with the topic...ok concept..

flows were a lil off mayne...if u had a lil more multis here it wud have been a lil better...the only part i liked in this whole short track are the hooks...better/cool...


idk this aint my type...but yeah from another point of view it was okay!


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Old 08-11-06, 05:52 PM   #11
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Thanks for the feed, Returning favours now.
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Old 08-17-06, 12:46 PM   #12
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Hook - i actually thought it wuz coo, i did the same switchin off between two MCs bar afta bar....
1st MC - ya flow wuz strate, delivery wuz there...and the quality wuz good....
2nd MC - wasn't feelin tha flow.....kinda choppy dunno.....delivery wuz lackin....but wuz on beat...lyrics were strate thoe....
3rd MC- flow is nice, delivery is nice........lyrics were strate
4th MC - came the best, nice flow, good lyrics.....feelin tha delivery...quality wuz crisp too.....

so yall were switchin every 4 bars i think......overall nice lil club banga......

rtf if ya could: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233473

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