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10-16-05, 05:50 PM | #1 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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Knee Deep
IP: 0825 899A
Knee Deep Was deranged as a child, expections werent high Living on the cold streets, man its hard to get by Crack addict living alone, practically in a trash can Some knew me as the dealer, others as sebastian Subtely laying low, there is a warrant for my arrest Got my coke all set, ready to distrbute to the rest Pondering of my life, how I quickly chose my paths Neva went to school, Didnt graduate with my class Broken down bum livin the life everyone despises Standin alone on the corner, as a customer arises Lookin suspicious, as I ask him if he's with the cops Scorns me with his eyes,"I can assure that I'm not" So I fork the coke over, As he hands over 5 Lincolns Convinced he was a cop, fuck what was I thinking Counting my profit as I swiftly walk down the road "Im witht he police, your underarrest for selling coke" Astonished of what is happening, drop the coke n run Went from making money, to being a suspect # one Dropped from behind, cuffs ruffly placed on my wrist Being read my rights, the 5-0 played this out slick Sentenced 40 years to life, in the state penitentary First time ive been caught, starting in elementary Was free ballin my life, livin life day by day yo Now im in this shit KNEE DEEP for sellin that yayo My parents informed of this, they shed not 1 tear Visits not expected, after 4 months that was clear Late at night I think, then I slowly began to weep Not noticed by the people, not they got me Knee deep
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10-16-05, 05:55 PM | #2 | |||||
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204846 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210485
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10-16-05, 06:45 PM | #3 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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I really like this piece. I thought the imagery was very well done. For me it flowed really well and the progression of the story was really good. I'd give it an 8/10. Keep comin up with these, i like ur style.
Peace. Hope u return the favor. Last edited by Bonafide : 10-16-05 at 07:21 PM. |
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10-16-05, 07:00 PM | #4 | |||||
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thanks for the feed man, uppin....
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