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toneyself is that guy dressed up on frosties serial box/
stopped with a knife to cut the tiger, rippin nails outta paws/
i'll rip your teeth out, to bite your own tongue causin agerny/
ur a prosturetute, haveing sex, i mean your a giggerlo/
shave your afro frow cut, like shears cutting hedges trimming/
leave it with a massive hole, like shotgun shell went through it/
throw your dead body down a cliff edge attached to big stone/
this guys just plain, like a grain of rice, with no lyrical spice/
this guys never gonna be superstardom, more like the kings super natural bordom/
last verse to spit at this bitch, fuck your mum and kiss the ass for me survivin/

i saw ya raps couldn t see a ryme in the whole damn verse
im raps doctor here to pickup ya flow dispose it in a hearse

really it hurts with a finemind like mine, not yours
its like im battling raps opposite.. his flows in reverse

kinda like a wheres waldo but in text not red and white shirts
cause your crap is hard to swallow from any vet man it hurts

just advise to anyone that might have lost 2 you i mean
change your name, address and str8 replace your dreams

if he spit religious not even god could understand what he thinks
cuz this dude is oblivious... not even close to what ryming means

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uppin............................................. ........

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wsup all holla fo votez.........................................

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Fucking hell Tony killed you fine,,,


Uping some votes...

yo i didn t bother droppin hard after seein this dudez flow

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cmon peeps can we get a vote up in here?????????????

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yo can we just get at least one vote in here damn!

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Tony took this battle wit ease...Fine you gotta break down your verses dawg coz u might be rhyming n all but u just cant tell where the structure of your verses is whats stopping you from elevating perhaps u need to practice a lil on the open mic or cypher because ur battle record is gettin affected by this. Tony good verse nice structure good personals and decent punches.

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

damn uppin ... please end this mysery sumwun....................................

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Y'all can DQ my vote for being unexplained...but, i'm not wasting my time on this wackness

Fine Mind simple can not rhyme..PERIOD.


Vote: Tony Self


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uppin............................................. ....

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yo lets get this thang closed..............................

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