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06-24-03, 02:03 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Spittin' Superior Intellect
IP: 1B3B C284
Peep this shit as i release words as im about ta spit................................
When my 'spits' rip 'discs' from ya "spine" my "lines" become explosive like "land-mines"// No time to 'procastinate' cuz on my journey ta fame as i 'dominate' there's more whacks to 'eradicate'// Wired fate u will b put in ya 'place' 6ft under wit a mangled & disfigured 'face'// Erase ur 'profile' u've been destroyed n all tha 'while' u've become anotha statistic to tha body-bag 'pile'// Freestyle symmetrically i can 'mirror' my image anyday as i go 'here' n there wit no 'fear'// Steer u wit proposterous 'power' no stoppin' me now or at any time within tha 'hour'// Tower over u im a lyrical 'giant' my genetic transformations make me tha illustrious em-cee 'tyrant'// Fire it off like a 'AK-47' no way wit tha crimes i have commmited on earth that im going ta 'heaven'// Revin' my 496 Camaro 'SS' now way when going 150 can u touch tha 'best'// Check ur chest fo ur 'rib-cage' cuz i break bones like tooth-picks wit my devestatin' 'rage'// Page upon page i may still b to 'young' but when i have already started im jus gonna have 'fun'// Run from tha 'police' im already wanted in tha west so its retorical i should head 'east'// Beast of tha 'abyss' im heart-'less' no reason to start beefin' cuz i will end it if u start 'this'// Incest n immoral 'tendacies' no one ahead of 'me' so i might as well kill this outcast 'G'// Hardly is what ur able to see i only fuck fine 'hoes' only tha ones busted n curved i 'suppose'// Chose this 'life' by tha time im 20 i will have a 'wife' n no more chances of suicide usin' a 'knife'// Twice tha length of what i 'wanted' this spray enters ur brain n invades ur dreams n leaves ya 'haunted'// Bonded to this style of writtin' ill 'text' not knowin' whats 'next' i give into it cuz its too 'complex'// Flex my 'skills' my rhymes 'kill' like overdosin' on heroine or ecstasy 'pills'// Still now tha i have had my 'fill' u respond wit comments n do what u 'will'// |
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06-24-03, 03:16 PM | #2 | ||||||
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not bad dawg, why the " " around the rhymin words? Anyway, you had nice vocab here, try to up your rhyming vocab..but overall this was pretty nice...
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