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Old 11-19-09, 12:13 PM   #1
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Old 11-20-09, 04:16 PM   #2
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dont have an account to facebook u have to log in to listen to,put it on z share and ill give u feedback
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Old 11-20-09, 07:38 PM   #3
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Old 11-20-09, 09:13 PM   #4
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man i broke it down a little more and posted but the site messed up.......so ill do it again just not as detailed..
listening,like the beat is that a custom bone thughs sample??feeling it.
first verse,like how your riding the beat, lyrics are decent,gets better at the end,
2nd verse,lyrics are pretty cool,
3rd verse,riding the beat decent,lyrics are decent.........
overall 6.5 out of 10 no hate just honest feedback,but i did like what u did with the beat if that was u.......return the favor if u would be so kind...
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Old 12-08-09, 02:47 PM   #5
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i think u ment boomerang, rather than frisbi. u say the n word too much. imma still that locness big foot concept. second dudes quality doesn't sound as good. menu and simple doesn't rhyme. third dude sound good, like his shit best. fast or slow and that like birth control line i like. i may get this beat. good ish though, good track to collab on and i like that theres no hook.
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