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Old 10-15-09, 05:43 PM   #1
Young Kidd (LM)
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Lil' Shawty - Produced By Johnny Juliano

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I was bored. Did this in a couple minutes as you can tell..
just felt like throwing it up..
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Old 10-19-09, 01:07 PM   #2
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dont like sayin please. but the rest is good, good flow, i like the hook. i just don't like sayin please cuz its less cocky and kinda beggy sounding
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Old 10-19-09, 02:38 PM   #3
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i see where your coming from.
when i do the full track i think i'll cut that out. if i redo it lol
but thats def appreciated.
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