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03-29-06, 01:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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-Too Ill For You, Son!-
IP: 0BD5 203C
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Rey's Dreams Never Come True Spul's This Way, That Way. I'll Swipe You Out The Passenger Side Of Car While I'm Servin The Shots Like Waiters At Bars! Faded Ink, Behind Bars, Baracated To Think Put The Game In Grave Danger And Made It Extinct! Simple Yet Comlex With Mystical Wizardry Picture Me, Kodak Moment.... ....While I Bring Lyrical Imagery!! Disasemble The Industry...Like It's Flexible Chop Up It's Infantry.... ...To Have Parts Laying Right Next To You!! See My Spits Ill Like Contagious Viral Diseases Good Genes In Me.... ...Clean, Startched Up, And Stiff At The Creases!! I Seize This, Rap Game Packed With Iffy Flows Rhymes, Coke Lines, And Dimes In Kinky Clothes!! Crack Spines Through The Path I Strickly Chose I Convay Enough Brilliance To Crack Divincie Codes!! So Back The Fuck Up, I Rip Notes Like Mad Composers I Pack Anthrax, Hand Wrapped..... .....So Stand Back For A Shockin' Enclosure!! |
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03-29-06, 08:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
uppin for some feedback................................
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03-30-06, 09:56 AM | #3 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
6 views and no feedback?! wtf?! it's not that hard to read a small verse.
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03-30-06, 10:17 AM | #4 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 7B47 A1C4
nice drop son!!!
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03-30-06, 10:47 PM | #5 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
wow........that was some real deep feedback
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03-31-06, 12:27 AM | #7 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
thanks for the feedback, yeah i know the flow was a bit choppy.
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03-31-06, 05:04 PM | #8 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
This was pretty decent slight above average peice. Lines were nice but maybe i need to hear it actually raped to follow through with the flow. But anyways this was pretty decent.
7/10 Rtf on my OM's linked in my sig.(Try shooting for "Back To Buisness" Or "Just Ridin Through")
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04-03-06, 12:52 AM | #9 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 7B8D 4EDF
aight man, thanks for the feedback.................
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04-04-06, 07:48 PM | #10 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: DF79 C963
Nah man, you ain't shit.
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04-04-06, 08:11 PM | #11 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: C954 E0CC
this was pretty cool man...besides your first bar bein played..it was nice..
fav lines... Faded Ink, Behind Bars, Baracated To Think Put The Game In Grave Danger And Made It Extinct! Simple Yet Comlex With Mystical Wizardry Picture Me, Kodak Moment.... ....While I Bring Lyrical Imagery!! the rest was coo too, keep droppin man this was a nice read |
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04-05-06, 10:27 PM | #12 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: ED4D A17B
thanks and ike. screw you
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04-05-06, 11:26 PM | #13 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 7328 601D
This flowed really nicely with the way you structured it and used your wordplay. I thought alot of your similies were really basic though. Thought this piece was a great job at self glorification, if you want to brag - this is how you do it. One thing that really annoyed me - How You Capitilized Every Word. overall though i thought the piece was a pretty fun read, couldve used more complexity, but cool nonetheless.
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...483#post2710483
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04-05-06, 11:33 PM | #14 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 7B8D 4EDF
Thanks homie, i was just bored and decided to come up with some self glorification. lol
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04-15-06, 01:34 AM | #15 | |||||
Sam Dope
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IP: A201 1B3D
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Lmfao, is that why you started shit with me? Because you think I'm Ike? News for ya buddy, I'm not Ike. Wow, you're fucking stupid. |
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