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11-26-06, 12:21 PM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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5. Te Ora (7-3) vs 6. grams (2-0)
IP: DD7B 9A68
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11-26-06, 11:46 PM | #2 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 7699 FD3A
check............16?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237641 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237644 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237639 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237721 Last edited by grams : 12-02-06 at 11:36 PM. |
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11-27-06, 12:06 AM | #3 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 5163 CDCF
word, 16 is cool..
g'l * http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237639 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237641 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237645 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237648 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237723 Last edited by Te Ora : 12-02-06 at 04:10 PM. |
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11-29-06, 04:18 AM | #4 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 7699 FD3A
Ora gel is for toothaches, numb that shit when it hurts
you should numb your hands................... To prevent yourself from posting a shitty verse Quote:
I'm not sure whats worse, really not too much to say cept' that your a subpar dude that gets hyped up by MRK You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises So step the fuck back and use a played drug line, G... dude tried to steal my keyboard so he could type like me I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock Te's family would've been thankful................... until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it If I ever seen you in a bar, I'd throw a bottle and start a fight I go barhoppin' on Wednesdays.................................... So I'll drop now so you won't have to sweat it till' Thursday night |
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11-30-06, 05:05 PM | #5 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 5163 CDCF
i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS kempo must have a sense of humour as his jokes are considerable he squared me off against a square.. & i laughed 'cause it's so literal Quote:
that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things 'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !? but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar |
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12-01-06, 03:53 AM | #6 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: BD83 5678
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock Te's family would've been thankful................... until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it VS. i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest & seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar Aight, this was a cool battle. Both dropped pretty raw with consistent verses. All of the punches were decent in their own right, but not all were worth quoting. I have Te taking this battle because he had just one more bar that was quotable. That grammar line also was fucking raw, and the fruit of your labour line was nice. Grams had the thanksgiving line which was funny, the only problem with his verse was he used a bit too much gay lines, although they were funny. V/ - Te Ora |
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12-01-06, 12:10 PM | #7 | |||
The Philly B LP
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IP: 0FDA 614C
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it vs that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things 'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !? but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar V/te ora....this was a good one...close battle...grams those lines where pretty good.. i felt them..but you did fell off in some areas also some played lines you had...te those lines i quoted where dope...you verse was all around more consistent with less played lines you get my vote. |
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12-01-06, 04:20 PM | #8 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 570E 362C
Ora gel is for toothaches, numb that shit when it hurts
you should numb your hands................... To prevent yourself from posting a shitty verse ^GOOD SHOT, I HAVEN'TBEEN HERE LONG E-NUFFF TO KNOW IF THIS NAMEPLAY IS PLAYED ONHIM OR NOT SO I'MAGO HEAD AND QUOTE IT You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat LMAO Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises ^LOL vs that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse ^ FUNNY STUFF but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim ^NICE .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar ^ GOOD SHOT AT HIS NAME ALSO I have it tied in quotes so I'm gonna but those against each other to see who got the better shit. I like the "Excluded Punchline" Quote but the fact that Gram actually did spit some kinda negated thatand I liked that "Orajel" thing so ADVANTAGE GRAM. The "Subway line was funny but the TE line about the "Rank" came off alil more harsher since it was a good personal flipped into an insult. ADVANTAGE TE ORA The "gilrly Men" line was also funny but It coulda got used on N.e body where as the Wordplay on Te's "Grammer"line hit harder cause it was actually about the other guy kinda similar to the last comparison so ADVANTAGE TE ORA v/ Te Ora One more quote from either coulda swung it in your favor without question but since quotes were tied I had to judge it that way. Te Ora just had the more direct hits.
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12-01-06, 05:38 PM | #9 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: 252D 486B
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it vs that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things 'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !? but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar te got this 1 easy he had more quotes n' everything the other guy had some iight lines but te got this 1, nothing more to say v/ te |
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12-01-06, 06:46 PM | #10 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 3B3F ACD1
grams
You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat So step the fuck back and use a played drug line, G... dude tried to steal my keyboard so he could type like me vs te ora i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest & seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things 'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !? .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar i felt this battle...grams started out good but kinda feel off ...i thought he was gonna take this..te ora had to many hott lines i felt the lbs and dimebags line vote-Te ora
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12-01-06, 07:58 PM | #11 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: ADF0 D82C
good looks people....nice drop te.
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12-01-06, 08:11 PM | #12 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 5163 CDCF
yea, props on the battle dude. i'll get to voting a lil later.
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12-01-06, 09:20 PM | #13 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: CCBE 9926
Overall I feel that Te Ora Took this battle basically bcuz of his consistency of punchez not jus how hard they hit but how manu he threw and he actually kept it a little more personal then Grams did if you ask me so my vote goes to
te ora
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12-01-06, 10:08 PM | #14 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: ECA0 5D38
I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock
Te's family would've been thankful................... until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it vs. i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest & seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you .this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars & i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar that thanksgivin line by grams was prolly tha funniest thing that I've read in awhile. tha ora line was cool too. But overall didn't come close to Te's verse. Openin was killer. Closer was ill. eurything in tha middle hit nicely. not much to say. Vote-Te Ora |
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12-02-06, 07:18 AM | #15 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: DD7B 9A68
Up over no-shows.
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