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!Riff Raff! 0 0%
MR.Goodbar 5 100.00%
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Old 07-11-04, 11:05 AM   #1
MR.Goodbar
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MR.Goodbar vs. !Riff Raff!

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You ain't ever seen multiples this sick. . .

Im'ma click-clack six-gats to pist'-smack Riff Raff/
Six-whacks and this-cats down for the dirt-nap/
I rip-raps so sick-that they bitch-smack Riff-Raff in Half/
with so much wit-that they take his breathe away like tic-tacs/
Stick & stab hits & jabs like kindey punches until your lip's-black/
You're Riff "Ruffle", Im hungry enough-to eat the whole "chip"-bag/
I'm hard to follow like a zig-zag/
this-fag wanna battle? Im'ma clap-black like Ja in his last vid-cast/
Riff Raff, any-last words before I sit-back to chill/
This bitch-ass got served like food straight off the grill/

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Headlines: Watch Mr. Goodbar serve !Riff Raff! with the sick:SICK:sick multiples here: Mr.Goodbar vs. !Riff Raff!

In Other News: 5-0 K.O. MrGoodbar vs BigChase
 
Old 07-11-04, 11:19 AM   #2
!RIFF RAFF!
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From: Newcastle..England..
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this aint my verse jus wanted to show y`all some real multis.

My phrases bring praises and give nipples raises...
They send you through phases of dope lyrical crazes...
You'll be lost and dead in my mazes while your shit barely grazes...
I'll spit hatred at you, run your ass through, evil, like Hitler to a Jew!
Let my woman tease you with a screw, then leave your balls blue...
Inflict you like the flu, collect to me what's due, bang your girl named Sue...
Like Elvis, your heart will sieze, like Ebola, it's diseased...
I'm so cold, I freeze those on their knees trying to please!
So take heed and follow my lead, I've just planted a seed...
Son, you're deeply in need, your rhymes sickly bleed, you're stuck, like a cat that's been treed!

aight checking into battle drop proper verse soon....
if you want goodbar you can go again if u upset im a post 2 drops jus so youve no exuse when i beat you.
it up to you.
dont say i never offered
 
Old 07-11-04, 11:26 AM   #3
MR.Goodbar
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nah dog Im straight, drop as many verses as you want, im waiting on how many multi's you can do with my name
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Headlines: Watch Mr. Goodbar serve !Riff Raff! with the sick:SICK:sick multiples here: Mr.Goodbar vs. !Riff Raff!

In Other News: 5-0 K.O. MrGoodbar vs BigChase
 
Old 07-11-04, 11:30 AM   #4
Luse Cannon
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So is ya'll spittin 2 or is this it. cuz I'm bout to drop a vote if it is?
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Old 07-11-04, 11:32 AM   #5
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nuh uh, !Riff Raff! wanted to show me some of his multi's, that wasn't his reply to mine
 
Old 07-11-04, 11:46 AM   #6
!RIFF RAFF!
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From: Newcastle..England..
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mr "goodbar" good you are but your nowhere near my stature.
my quick wit spits hit faces that hard ............
.............they leave jaws fractured//
shit bitch jus quit you couldnt rip a wet news-paper
im the first vet hes ever met...... he a newb-chaser.//
dude youll loose this dule im a murder ya.
fuck punchlines how this for a personal.........
.......ive never heard of ya//
you bring shame and disgrace on your pround nation
i mean ive battled better cats.......
........down the stray kitten foundation.//
cant be arsed with this bitch...... fuck this im out
youve been hithard below the belt.....
................now "your nuts are in your mouth"(goodbar qoute)
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Old 07-11-04, 11:48 AM   #7
!RIFF RAFF!
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From: Newcastle..England..
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good bar who you rideing with.....
im making a crew if you interested....
be co leader if ya like........ its called The Empire
pm me
 
Old 07-11-04, 12:37 PM   #8
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^^^^^^^^^^^uppin for votez. Ive hit up 6 battles today, where you at pepole?

Ahh, really got no interest in crewz, havent thought much about it
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Headlines: Watch Mr. Goodbar serve !Riff Raff! with the sick:SICK:sick multiples here: Mr.Goodbar vs. !Riff Raff!

In Other News: 5-0 K.O. MrGoodbar vs BigChase
 
Old 07-12-04, 12:30 AM   #9
MR.Goodbar
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yall-are-some SLEEPING motherfuckers, this battles been up for almost a day and not one vote I've hit up 8 battles and not none returned...
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Headlines: Watch Mr. Goodbar serve !Riff Raff! with the sick:SICK:sick multiples here: Mr.Goodbar vs. !Riff Raff!

In Other News: 5-0 K.O. MrGoodbar vs BigChase
 
Old 07-12-04, 12:52 AM   #10
Orijinal
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
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Im'ma click-clack six-gats to pist'-smack Riff Raff/
Six-whacks and this-cats down for the dirt-nap/
EHH I GUESS..THE MULTIES WAS GOOD..AIGHT OPENER 7/10
I rip-raps so sick-that they bitch-smack Riff-Raff in Half/
with so much wit-that they take his breathe away like tic-tacs/
DUDE NICE WIT MULTIES..BUT NOTTA GOOD PUNCH..PLAYED DA TIC-TACS 6/10
Stick & stab hits & jabs like kindey punches until your lip's-black/
You're Riff "Ruffle", Im hungry enough-to eat the whole "chip"-bag/
HEH..I LIKE THE RUFFLE & CHIPS LINE..GOOD..8/10
I'm hard to follow like a zig-zag/
this-fag wanna battle? Im'ma clap-black like Ja in his last vid-cast/
NAH IT AINT HAPPNIN.."CLAP BACK" WAS PLAY'D ASWELL..6/10
Riff Raff, any-last words before I sit-back to chill/
This bitch-ass got served like food straight off the grill/
AIIGHT CLOSER..LIKE I SAID..AIIIIIIIIGHT..7/10

34/50

mr "goodbar" good you are but your nowhere near my stature.
my quick wit spits hit faces that hard ............
.............they leave jaws fractured//
EHH..I WAS HOPIN A PUNCHLINE OPENER..THATS JUSS BEIN HOOD ON DA OPENER 6/10
shit bitch jus quit you couldnt rip a wet news-paper
im the first vet hes ever met...... he a newb-chaser.//
EHH..NUTTIN SPECIAL..JUSS A SPACER..LOOKIN 4 PUNCHES 5/10
dude youll loose this dule im a murder ya.
fuck punchlines how this for a personal.........
.......ive never heard of ya//
NOT HAPPNIN.."YA" AT THE SAME LINE ENDINGS..NOT HAPPNIN WEAK..6/10
you bring shame and disgrace on your pround nation
i mean ive battled better cats.......
........down the stray kitten foundation.//
KINNA SIMPLISTIC PUNCHLINE..BUT....A PUNCHLINE..6/10
cant be arsed with this bitch...... fuck this im out
youve been hithard below the belt.....
................now "your nuts are in your mouth"(goodbar qoute)
EHH..A PERSONALL..BUT..A WEAK ONE..IIGHT CLOSER..7/10

30/50

VOTE--GOODBAR
Can yall please vote honestly on my current battle, heres the link, please!:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133559
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Old 07-12-04, 06:43 AM   #11
!RIFF RAFF!
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From: Newcastle..England..
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uppin
 
Old 07-12-04, 06:53 AM   #12
BrOtHa-HoOd
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mr good bar's shit had the better of flow structure n punches, the wordplay n multiz were gud, riff raff was aight but he didnt seem to b matching the quality of mr.g

v- mr goodbar

drop 1 on this link... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062
 
Old 07-12-04, 10:49 AM   #13
Terumoto
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maaan... goodbar.. you got skill kinda, but all of your multies are FORCED... there was no punches.. you really gotta spread ya vocab.. i wasnt feelin ya structure either.. too hard to read with all the bolded shit.. ever heard of hyphens?

Riff: I dont liek youre structure, but i think you take this battle on account of punches.. a few lines were stretched but flow doesnt win battles... does it mr goodbar...?

v/ riff raff

could you return the favor on the battles in my sig

one
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Old 07-12-04, 05:54 PM   #14
QBsmasher
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Pretty good battle both of yall came hard, It was a pleasure to read it.

Mr. Goodbar: Some pretty syck multies in there, I was really feelin them, really gives the flow an added bonus. Punches were hittin very hard with all the multies that were throwin in there. Really feelin this line:

Stick & stab hits & jabs like kindey punches until your lip's-black/
You're Riff "Ruffle", Im hungry enough-to eat the whole "chip"-bag/

!RIFF RAFF! - I noticed you were gettin personal, and some of the punches were hittin pretty hard. It was hard to call at some of the punches, your flow was pretty tight also, structure coulda been a little more on point. I think he really got you with the flow and all the multies he had just really tied his verse together.

v/Mr. Goodbar
 
Old 07-12-04, 06:04 PM   #15
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Goodbar took this one. His structure was koo and he had some good multis. His punches werent hittin that hard but riffs werent either. Riffs structure was kinda off too. Goodbar takes this one with better multis and a better structue and flow.

Vote - Goodbar
Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134141
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