The darkness of Hell constantly prevails in my life//
its sharp as a knife, and fills to the brim with strife//
struggeling to live, through darkness so deep//
as i rest in sleep, i feel my heart take a leap//
this world i am in is dangerous as can be//
scares me everyday, from alot i should'nt see//
This age is hard to stand, kidz like us need a hand//
cuz we feel like were slippin, falling into quick sand//
I look up to the skys and pray i'll be there one day//
hell if i may, i could be there today but i'd rather stay//
god if you will forgive all my sins, its my heart to cleanse/
lets come to amends, i will never purposly sin again//
lifes so hard, feel like i have to lay out my card//
I try to dis regard, but its hard when it hit the backyard//
touble is on the double its everywhere yo can go//
its hard to show, as you should know its on a steady flow//
lets try to think, feel like im drowin in the earths sink//
i need to get my life in sync, cuz im not what you think//
when darkness comes up i try to run and hide//
from what i abbide, its just really hard to let slide//
the deepness of my soul, i have to let these feelings loose//
verbal abuse, i feel like i should just rest in a neuss//
suicide isnt my thing, i love my life its just hard to live//
i learded i have to live with whatever they must give//
when the darkness of hell arrises i conquer face to face//
my life isnt the right place, i need my own space//
so from here ashes to ashes and dust to dust//
i live with lust, from which hells darkness must//

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Authentik Intelligence,
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i ain't seen you on open mic much, but i'ma be lookin' for your threads more often. hot spit dun. i'm feelin' it. you had nice wordplay, lines flowed well, all over hot piece.

yo yall dont sleep uppin

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Authentik Intelligence,
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aight this was ok.my piece crew piece murdered this though.
No beef, but my nan could type up better shit than this!!lol!
Nah, on the real, good wordplay and Vocab and all that, i'll look for ya pieces in future...

whatever hater thanx uppin

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Authentik Intelligence,
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fuk that dude I like it had nice flow I didn't stumble once spittin this ish, fukin' tight keep it up homes. Peace out

This was aight, but u have no right 2 call me wack do u now?

this as ill lethal. dope flow, decent wordplay all around a good peice. stay up. ya know what i think this is the first time ive ever seen you in the open mic link too. either way stay up.
peace, joey