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| T.r.oo.P |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
| I Am Unreal. |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
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05-29-06, 03:44 PM
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I Am Unreal. vs T.r.oo.P
IP: 9BD8 BEAB
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20-40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic: Why? (Always wanted to try this one...) 3 to check, 3 to drop. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-01-06 at 03:44 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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05-30-06, 03:27 PM
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IP: F718 BE03
I Am Unreal. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-06 03:27 PM.
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05-30-06, 10:36 PM
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IP: CACA 8E73
Why?
Dear God: I wish to make a deal. A proposition, if just someday… -I pledge to be honest; I’ll even go to church on Sundays Only for one thing… And I’m sorry I have to ask but… Wait… Let me start over… ….You know I’ve always loved you right? Had faith and trust? So why’d you have to go and abandon us?! How much longer must I repent and cry? I’ll resent and die, c’mon just tell me why! Elated on air, Allah, here he sits and listens Has no reasons for one’s trouble but christens the poor Christian with a silent thought Distraught, he wonders what was taught through the rotting of his parent’s past God sighs, then laughs… He holds no response within his defining light But applies the question to his mind, “Why?” Why not? Answer me GOD! Why won’t you help me? Why, WHY?! Is it because you resent me? Growing unhealthy, the Christian stops and blinks Answer me now! His excitement rises, then sinks As he averts his eyes to the kitchen sink, a twinkling object sits, to be twisted into his wrists… He slits, the blood spills the reddish tinge of conflict Shit… SHIT I’m going to die!! And there God thinks, But why? Haven’t I made all people equal with a chance to succeed? Provided the path, paved it, and they destroy it with greed Now they’re pleading for forgiveness, ruined my work The body is my temple and they destroyed it, those jerks I laugh when they ask for a second chance… And why? Then with one last gasp the Christian asks, then sighs… Why not?
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05-31-06, 01:05 PM
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IP: 3C62 382D
T.r.oo.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-06 01:05 PM.
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06-03-06, 02:45 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
*Stands By My Dieing Comrads Hospital Bed* *Watches His Vitals Go Flat.......He's Gone* Dear Lord "Why"....... didnt you Put us in a Better Position "Why" .....werent we relocated to a better Living Condition "Why".... .were we placed in this Situation in the 1st Place "Why" did He have 2 Suffer From Severe Wounds 2 His Face "Why"... is he Convulsing.... into this Functionless Vegetable "Why" is a Brother who has Intelligence No longer Respectable "Why" Do we Subdue...... 2 The Hypocritic Visions of Children That in the End Turn there Back on who Fucking Built Them "WHY" did He have 2 Die.."Why" must we Cry................... For 4 Hours when you Knew he wasent gonna make it By...... The First Bullet that got Lodged Into the Skull of His Cranium "Why" are we Weak 2 the Same Streets that are Playin Em... "Officer"... *Excuse Me...can u tell u give us any info on the shooting?* "Jimmy" *Wtf...is that all ya Care About...cant u see he's Dead* "Officer" *I just have a few Questions Sir* "Jimmy" *NO i have a few Questions 4 You SIR!! "Why" do these Fucking Pigs.. not care about who was Shot But Instantly Interview Me on Who's Hot Or Not on the Block "Why" ...am i asking these Questions or these Speculections "Why". do u Look at Us Blacks like we dont have Educations "Why" do you believe your Billy Bad Ass when u get a Badge "Why" if a White Women Calls you dont take an Hour & Half But if a Black Calls it takes you 2 Hrs......"Why" do the Math "Why" when you See a Homeless Pedestrian You Must Laugh "Why" when you See Freestyling on the block..u end the Fun "Why" do you believe your above anyone cuz u have a Gun? "Doctor" *Im Sorry We Couldnt Save Him...Does he have a Family? "Jimmy" *No...But can i ask u a Question?* "Why" when he was rushed in...you didnt even try 2 Hurry "Why"... if you dont have insurance you Stop the Surgery "Why" do only care bout the Pension... and not Who's He "Why" do White Doctors Outnumber Blks Twenty to Three Do you feel your better than me..because you have a blade "Why" ..if you cant pay your debt's you treat us as a slave "Why"... with all your research cant stop aids when a Lens "Why" cant u Pay his Debt if your gettin to work in a Benz? "Why" do ya only wanna know...His credit type and his Name "Why" do u leave the hospital in worst condition than u came? *Fuck This....Gathers My Friends Things..Gives My Rest In Peace Then Leaves........
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06-04-06, 11:49 AM
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IP: 63C2 FFF3
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06-04-06, 12:55 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
up................................................ ............
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06-04-06, 08:44 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
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06-05-06, 10:03 PM
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IP: E056 3770
lol @ pathetic activity levels....................
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06-07-06, 02:34 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
righ.....this is why i dont battle here no mo.....
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06-09-06, 03:26 AM
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This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
IP: 860D ECBB
This was a dope battle, I am's verse won it
but troop come dope dropping some really shit,... Uping this for my boys stay up both 1~ |
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06-09-06, 08:46 AM
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IP: 48FA B2BF
Voted For: T.r.oo.P
deep thoughts from both sides but i think troop got this for being more down to earth with his concept...he spoke more on reality and his whole verse was so true...he had a better flow and gd sequence of the whole scenario..unreal had a nice concept there too but at lots of points i cudnt understand the question he was actually askin God..plus he talks about christians and then calls God Allah...outta point to me there...troop,yeah had more vocab and his verse was more touching...so with this he gets my vote props to both tho.... click my sig...thank you
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06-09-06, 03:33 PM
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IP: 61C0 1BCA
Voted For: I Am Unreal.
vote goes to Unreal... both had nice, unique interpretations, but Lucky fell off on the last stanza... u completely lost it... it was too... it's hard to explain... it was too song-ish, and lost reality... sorta reminded me of Jadakiss's flow, but u lost it when it was more about rhyming, and less about the story... both were good, keep writing... 1...
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06-09-06, 07:09 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
1-1 finally some votes
of course it was a good battle its AI in the muthafuckin building
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06-09-06, 11:23 PM
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IP: 68C7 9037
lol we run the show.... as for christians calling god allah: allah is just another term for god, it can be implied in all religions that believe in "God"
v/ rv vs ai.
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