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Old 03-28-03, 06:55 PM   #1
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Darkness & Light

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Verse 1: (darkness)
Darkness is an aspect in society that shouldn’t be explored,
It’s best to be avoided or ignored,
Bringing pain and affliction, like a criminal murdering and getting his conviction,
The root to all things evil, bringin death to the old & feeble,
Think of darkness and first comes to mind pain... hurt,
Some have it in they blood from they birth,
This has been existing, from the earths very beginning,
From medieval to modern society people are found sinning,
Its like they singing,
A constant song of hate, its not destiny its havin no hope no faith,
Cant relate darkness with light… an equal opposite an antonym,
Cutting of emcees blood circulation with a syllable,
Shulda exterminated you in yo momma’s umbilical,
Kill a weak emcee not in a homicide way but lyrical,
Try-n escape this you will need more then a miracle.

Chorus:
Darkness… the root to all good things dissipated,
Verses creatin enemies’ hearses sumthin you neva anticipated,
Light… the key to survival the answer to elevation,
Personal enlightenment similar to meditation,
These two words hold the balance of good n evil in separation,
Imagine both of these elements combined into a form of an emcee,
Just visualize good and evil combining into an unbeatable entity,
[I am darkness and light].

Verse 2: (light)
With my lyrical celerity my ability to disappear,
And re-emerge in a distant-year,
All this due to me spittin at light-speed, I got the slight-need,
Of light shining guiding the pathway to utopia to tranquility,
Got everyone feeling-me,
This aura glows around my carbon based self,
Elevation in segments like rows on a shelf,
Stompin out emcees like an elephant, light is a very powerful element,
There’s evidence, that it helped people, turn from livin illegal,
Must show care and compassion,
Grab yo belt and fasten…it for this journey,
Light is my representation like a player’s jersey,
Only the worthy, have felt the presence, of a sixth sense,
My empire long lasting like an eternal burning incense,
Go near darkness and yo heart turns black in an instant,
Light is my only reason to breathe or else I would have to leave,
This earth I depend on it like its my accomplice,
With light on my side there’s nothing I can not accomplish.
Chorus:
Darkness… the root to all good things dissipated,
Verses creatin enemies’ hearses sumthin you neva anticipated,
Light… the key to survival the answer to elevation,
Personal enlightenment similar to meditation,
These two words hold the balance of good n evil in separation,
Imagine both of these elements combined into a form of an emcee,
Just visualize good and evil combining into an unbeatable entity,
[I am darkness and light].

Verse 3: (darkness and light)
What happens when darkness and light combine into matter,
Yo brain’s mainframe cant react and starts ta shatter,
My verses deliver mo pain then being burnt to the 3rd degree,
Any emcee fuck with me n in 10 bars I stand back and watch the aftermath the debris (debree),
What would happen if the earth got shifted uplifted to the moon’s position,
Surely the gravitational force would be missing,
Weather wouldn’t exist only darkness and light would control the planet,
Spittin my verses too quick emcees cant understand-it,
With such unbelievable powers that devours,
Anyone in my way stopping-me fake thugs poppin-me,
Neva witnessed in history, such a situation unsolved like a mystery,
Crushing emcees with my skills… lyrical,
Spit so fast my head seem invisible,
Lyrics mo true then a bible scripture… biblical,
Top speed subliminal,, counter to situations quicker then an escaped criminal,
Not the best but most durable material,
I am darkness and light combined, in my brain these skills have been confined,
Like a prisoner locked in solitary, I put fake emcees outta their misery voluntary,
Darkness and light united seems like something too violent-too scary,

Chorus:
Darkness… the root to all good things dissipated,
Verses creatin enemies’ hearses sumthin you neva anticipated,
Light… the key to survival the answer to elevation,
Personal enlightenment similar to meditation,
These two words hold the balance of good n evil in separation,
Imagine both of these elements combined into a form of an emcee,
Just visualize good and evil combining into an unbeatable entity,
[I am darkness and light].
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Old 03-28-03, 10:45 PM   #2
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Yo man, that was aiight, some very good vocab, good flow and rhymes, liked the concept, the only real criticism I've got on it Is I reckon the chorus was just a bit too long but anyways, its a good drop..

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Old 03-29-03, 12:48 AM   #3
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this was mad long... you will get slept on this time around i think... shorten your next drop... but this was cool... everything seemed to be on point to me... 8/10.. -2 cause it was long and i cant get that5 minutes of my life back... lol.. keep rhymin
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Old 03-29-03, 11:14 AM   #4
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thnx fo the criticizm, next time i'll make ti shorter, but this was a song i wrote so i couldnt make it small
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Old 04-03-03, 07:54 PM   #5
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Ok, well the thing is its so long, it kind of loses a lot. In audio this would be great, but the fact that its so long make's in 'boring' no offense. The content of the song is actually good, but the fact that I have to read it, it loses so much. Like I said the lyrical content is good.

Ok, one thing, your hook is 7 lines. Thats a really long hook. Usually a hook is only about 4 lines...buts its all good.

Keep on writing, good work,
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