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Old 11-07-03, 11:31 PM   #1
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**ALcaTRaKz - GeT By ReMiX ft.Scenario**

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AlcaTrakz - Get By Remix (ft. Scenario)

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Old 11-08-03, 06:05 PM   #2
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Old 11-08-03, 09:49 PM   #3
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can't say anything negative about this....shit was ill....seriously...
good piece...i enjoyed it...and the other shit in ur soundclick....
that one u did...against mystik...mad funny...like whoa...that beat
shit had me laughing...that is all.....


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Old 11-09-03, 04:12 AM   #4
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im gonan start making links that say

"my first audio"

or

"featuring DZk"

maybe ill get some listens
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Old 11-09-03, 02:27 PM   #5
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fuck eveveryone i respond to...lazy fucks

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Old 11-09-03, 02:54 PM   #6
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I'll peep this, I agree, some people dont give respect to other members...but I do the same thing so I shouldnt complain

aight lemme get thru these fuckin pop-ups so I can listen.

I'm takin it your remixin talib kweli's get by...very good song...gonna be hard to remix...and keep the hype up...damn nice start...you gotta good flow. I can see you can play with your voice pretty well for alot of different styles...man Im really feelin this...I dont like the part where you stop and talk back and forth, but it does give a lil feel, but just takes up the time on the track

next dude, aight kid's pretty ill, a lil better pronunciation and more emotion would help, flows on point but like I said the pronunciation could be help, that would help the flow alot too...
I cant tell if this ending of your verse is a chorus or what, it's kinda simple...I mean it keeps the feeling but it doesnt really keep the hype up, and the vocabs a lil week. lyrics kinda simple except for at the beginning the structure was nice.

and both of you, nice rhyme scheme, not many rappers try to switch up there rhyme schemes and just focus on every last syllable or just rhyme the last word of every line...very nice

did you add that lil band outro??? I like that, pretty nice.

I'm givin this an 8.5/10...but if I was just rating the verses, this would get like a 9/10...I just didn't like the talking, ya know? lol cuz the beat isnt really something you can talk on, it's just somethin to straight rhyme on. but this was pretty ill. lookin forward to see some more shit come from you.

by the way, can you critique my song snippet? "psycho part 2" it's just like 6 songs down from the top of the page, thanks

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Old 11-09-03, 03:39 PM   #7
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^that would be how i would sum this up also....second dude is on, but his enunciation is off.....

see REAL CRITIQUING....HONESTY...

ill peep yours in a sec
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Old 11-09-03, 05:45 PM   #8
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alright...... i feel you about the sleeping thing. although you seem to have accidentally* skipped my audio........ but anyways......

talib is ill so lets see how you guys do.
ok first guy which is you im guessing.... got a nice flow... lyrics are coo....... doing it justice.... talking isnt as bad as i expected from what fred was saying........
second guy........ umm i see the potential..... he is very nice with the flow... his words arnt clear at times. lyrical content is on point...
overall good track. i dont rate tracks..... but good shit....
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Old 11-09-03, 07:07 PM   #9
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lmao, sorry...I dunno, I was really getting into that verse cuz I think this is one of the greatest songs made and he really had me going, but than it stopped and he started and that lil tear that was forming in my eye just dissapeared lmao j/p. the talking wasnt that bad, Guess I...overexagerated a bit lol

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Old 11-10-03, 06:08 AM   #10
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im the second dude..and yes i realized my anounciation was horrible on this song lmao....good loks on the feedback tho..ill learn to open my mouth up more hah..
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Old 11-10-03, 07:28 PM   #11
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Old 11-10-03, 07:54 PM   #12
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aight not bad I realy like your flow and style. one thing You need to do is thinkin up the beat cauz it sounds like there is to much seperation between the vocals and beat. Hope you know what i mean. basicly it needs to be masterd. but other than that its great good job man Keep it up holla

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Old 11-10-03, 09:16 PM   #13
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i told you on aim how i felt about this peice....


along with what needs work
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Old 11-10-03, 09:48 PM   #14
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No I fixed it and finished it
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No I fixed it and finished it


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