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this is anuva song i made a while ago....tell me wutcha think i tried to keep the vibe of the original song the same...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3343269

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Asians are dope and junk.

beats ok, never really liked the original track. Flows ok, certain words dont come though clear, hook's meh, like I said didnt like the original track... lol @ 13 in the morning, you 24 hour clock mofo.
Quality is good, lyrics are ok, nothing to amazing, but its a ok track all round bro.

iite iit thanx man....i know lmao, thats cuz the partys never over, lmao

beat is kinda ho hum...just heard it too many times

ur flow fits it though...I like the stop/start flow you had at one point...got my attention

I heard a "pop" though at one point...Just one mistake

I like it

not a bad drop...

keep em comin

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

beat is swag, seriously weak, but thats taste, flow is ok, yeh sum words dont sound pronounced properly, u male or female?? sumtimes u sound like a chick other times u sound like a young boy lol, delivery is kinda boring though, lyrics ok, meh i wouldnt listen again if im honest.

turn your vocals up 2-3dB's or put a lil more energy in the vocals. Listening to the whole song, the lyrics work, but you have to work on forcing all the sylables in one line together because it makes your flow sound rushed. Like for exmple on the hook you say "welcome to st louis" is crunched together so you can get all the sylables in, but you should take out that ONE syl that's pushing everything together and put in something else, like.."welcome to the lou" (as an example) which would put things right back on time.

I know it's not your spittin ability, because you have skill, but your writtens are making it seem rushed on a song that otherwise would have been pretty damn good in my opinion. Right now it's about "ehh, good". Just my opinion.

Peace


PS, What time is 13 in the morning?

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lol...chekk post # 3 ^^^^^

Rule #1: If you gotta explain it...don't spit it.
Rule #2: Everything you say, audiably or conceptually has to be understood.

^excerpt from my handbook on how to be an effective emcee. word

Peace.

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