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Mind Emerging Into A World Of Wonderous Theme`s; Where Reality Is Fake & The Real, Lies In My Dreams. Eyes Are Keen, Twenty Four Seven I See The Unseen; Remain To Believe - Wrongs Were Made For Redeem. & Continue To Drift Into This Place To Focus My Mind; To Feel The True Emotion, Words One Of A Pure Kind. Thoughts Can Rewind, Bring Back The Time With Rhymes; I Can Imagine The Perfect & Create My Fitting Designs. Pure As Air, Scents Of Sweet Carrode & Abstruct Lives; The Ones Who Take There Own - To Make Others Cry. Pressure Crushes, To Show You Cant Forever Rely; Resouces Die, Thats When People Start The End to Lie. Ellegant Features - Peace, Visions & True Creatures; Hell Burns In Its Own Fire, Set With Death & its Teachers. Knowing There`s Wrong When Life Takes Its Breather; & Continues Its Exhaust & Pays A Cost For The Cheaper. World Taken For Granted, No One Decides To Consider; That This Place Is An Imagination Of A True Day Drifter! |
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10-08-03, 09:47 AM | #2 | ||||
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Damn Brother, this was a dope piece, ...u used some mad vocab in here, ....and it was well structured, wit a nice flow,...
Where Reality Is Fake & The Real, Lies In My Dreams. Eyes Are Keen, Twenty Four Seven I See The Unseen; Remain To Believe - Wrongs Were Made For Redeem. & Continue To Drift Into This Place To Focus My Mind; To Feel The True Emotion, Words One Of A Pure Kind. Really nuttin more to sasy bout this, This was real nice ^, i enjoyed this piece, ...lets collab?....pm me k?.... Props.
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10-08-03, 03:00 PM | #3 | ||||||
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^^ Wasn't feeling that at all] But the rest i was feeling immensly...Dope drop You had a solid scheme throughtout with some tight vocab that followed through with some enjoyable content too read Stay Up |
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10-09-03, 09:42 AM | #4 | ||||||
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Uppin for some feedback .
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10-09-03, 10:00 AM | #5 | ||||||
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^ What he said
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10-09-03, 10:26 AM | #6 | |||||||
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Quote:
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10-09-03, 11:33 AM | #7 | |||||||
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i would have to say that it was a nice drop, good line control to help it flow together a lot better...whoah, my minds stuck on rhymes...lol
altogether, real nice piece keep droppin...
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10-09-03, 01:01 PM | #8 | ||||||
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Uppin
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10-09-03, 04:24 PM | #9 | ||||||
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^ Yeah Yeah
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10-09-03, 04:47 PM | #10 | ||||||||
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damn, them too lines are pretty sick, you flow perfectly, but the creativity lacked I think, althought - Quote:
Check out my shit aight, safe. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0041#post830041 |
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10-09-03, 05:05 PM | #11 | ||||||
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nice verse dawg, very nice structure, dope vocab.. what more can i say..... ill keep bringen wit dem verses.... u gots mad potential
keep it real, pz ayo 1 more thing, watch for some shit i be spitten soon, used to be rapdis.com, now im here 5 months l8a.... so not a rook, just a lil rusty so dont be a h8a. pz out |
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