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Old 07-19-04, 12:16 AM   #1
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From: Bmore, Murderland
Street Legend vs. Killlah.......part 2

IP: 3240 794D

man.............i dont even give a fuck about rules man u keep tryna say im weak but im still beatin u mafucka..................

30 minute time limit after check
10 lines
no crew dick ridin or hate votes

man since im so weak u go first again........
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Old 07-19-04, 12:24 AM   #2
killlah
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checking in last time this nigga won on that bullshit but its all good
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Bdddddat lame cats get hit the fuck up so if you wanna talk get the fuck up and breathe easy.
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Old 07-19-04, 12:30 AM   #3
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yo check.......................
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Old 07-19-04, 12:33 AM   #4
killlah
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From: Ruff Raleigh Nc
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Last time out this nigga was claimin this and that
Matta fact I had his ass shook from want to clap
Suprised face to face you couldnt look in my eyes
Head down low prayin to God askin- crying why oh why
You lookin for me nigga you might wanna pass today
Have ya bitch ass lost in ya words like Hanks on Castaway
He claimin he on top like Mase and Brandy
Not knowing Im up there just to lace his family
Watch me nigga Im bout to get buck wild
Fuck this freestyle bitch you just walked the Green Mile


spit something bitch
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Old 07-19-04, 12:41 AM   #5
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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this is since im so weak..........

You should continue to battle newbs thats the only thing u do decent
the column for ya loses are steadily increasin
Ima lyrically demolish this foe, handlin all altercations
Vivid words will cause penetration, havin ya heart wastin
Im estimatin that at an approximation
of one spit i will leave this guys verse with deterioration
dawg you are humorusly overrated, constanly stimulated
by feed back based on exaggerration
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killah-nice opener.
If i see this nigga and he a block away
Im have his bitch ass doing tha rock away

i definately like the swagger about the line.
the problem is that because of the hot line it had me expecting more, and i'm afraid for the rest of the verse, you didn't deliver hard enough. over all it was a decent verse just not good enough to get over. props though.

v=supercilious

put an honest vote on my battle, it's linked below

hot shit i spit man verbs are subliminal
claimin i won my last battle against him on visual
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Old 07-19-04, 12:52 AM   #6
killlah
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Nigga need proof to exlpain why he should win come on dog thats lame if you ill like that then you shouldnt have to
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Old 07-19-04, 12:57 AM   #7
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From: Bmore, Murderland
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man you just try ya hardest to sway for votes dont you.................
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Old 07-19-04, 01:01 AM   #8
killlah
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Na I just feel there is a need for the people spit freestlye not do some lame shit like you wait 2 days and some change and then try and call me out nigga i done peeped ya game
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Old 07-19-04, 01:06 AM   #9
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Killah- Wack sorry but true your verse was wack ok structure ok flow but wack punches not even one I saw personals really wack no metahs you talked about garbage nah it was horrible I didnt even enjoy it I give it a 3/10

SL- Ok it was average not the best and I know why( cuz you had no compettion) you had some punches good flow good structure some good personals I enjoyed yours alot more than killah I would give you an average of 6/10

So my vote has to go to street legend
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Old 07-19-04, 01:11 AM   #10
T West
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killlah :
Last time out this nigga was claimin this and that
Matta fact I had his ass shook from want to clap
^from want to clap?...atleast it's a personal...

Suprised face to face you couldnt look in my eyes
Head down low prayin to God askin- crying why oh why
^weak...

You lookin for me nigga you might wanna pass today
Have ya bitch ass lost in ya words like Hanks on Castaway
^weak metaphor...think a lil' more

He claimin he on top like Mase and Brandy
Not knowing Im up there just to lace his family
^no...

Watch me nigga Im bout to get buck wild
Fuck this freestyle bitch you just walked the Green Mile
^no...



Street Legend:
You should continue to battle newbs thats the only thing u do decent
the column for ya loses are steadily increasin
^no...atleast its a personal...

Ima lyrically demolish this foe, handlin all altercations
Vivid words will cause penetration, havin ya heart wastin
^no...

Im estimatin that at an approximation
of one spit i will leave this guys verse with deterioration
^no...

dawg you are humorusly overrated, constanly stimulated
by feed back based on exaggerration
^personal atleast...worded horribly...but its a personal

hot shit i spit man verbs are subliminal
claimin i won my last battle against him on visual
^no...

Overall:...hmmmm...not the greatest battle to be honest. Killah...ur just makin obvious shit...you need to try and think of something fresh. The simple metaphor won't cut it. Street...your basically just usin good vocab for the sake of usin it...
"Im estimatin that at an approximation"
^your sayin the same shit...pointless multies...you could of added sumthin else in there.

But overall...der was only one line that actually wasn't a "no..." in this entire battle and that was posted by Street. So he gets my vote.

/v- Street Legend

Givin ya'll some real feedback. Take it any way you like, just tryin to help. Return the favour with honest votes plz.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135899
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135882


pz out. God Bless.

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Old 07-20-04, 01:59 AM   #11
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uppp...................
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Old 07-20-04, 05:07 AM   #12
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punches - Street Legend
flow - tie
creativity - Street Legend
language - Street Legend
structure - tie
fun factor - Street Legend

hand down v. Street Legend.
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Old 07-20-04, 11:09 PM   #13
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upp....................
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Old 07-21-04, 04:26 AM   #14
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can we get some votes.........its a close battle(lmfao)
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Old 07-21-04, 05:15 AM   #15
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LOL FUKKIN KILLAH U WACK NIGGA DAT WAS DA MOST basic verse i saw on here dunn damm man go watch freestyle friday or some shit so u could at least get a feel of battle rappin dunn ur ya verse had no punches,personals,creativity or nothin ....street ya first bars was fukked up ya first line was longer than ya second by alot of words nahmean u had some vocab i dotn really care 4 dat shit tho but at least ya verse had some creativity nahmean and a few punches

my vote-street

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