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05-02-04, 12:34 AM | #1 | |||||
smiley on ya mothers
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its all a hustle (my first audio)
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yeah this the first real audio ive ever done.. i can take all the criticizm possible
so spit it out here it is http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/mcpatmusic.htm |
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05-02-04, 01:10 AM | #2 | |||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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song aint cleared yet
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05-02-04, 01:33 AM | #3 | |||||
smiley on ya mothers
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word? shit aiight it will be up by tommorow then
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05-02-04, 01:35 AM | #4 | |||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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ill peep it then
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05-02-04, 09:59 PM | #5 | |||||
retired.
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aight... your flow could use some help... doesn't match the music 100%... its nice places but in some places its kinda off. lyrics weren't that great... nice beat... your deliery is also a bit off at some places, and it seems like your mic aint great (mines worse though...)
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05-02-04, 11:31 PM | #6 | |||||||
Heavy Lies The Crown
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yea flow was delivered right in some areas and if it was a freestyle it was pretty decent thats what it sounded like cause it was some hesitation through the flow lol and dont breath into the mic and get to now the beat better and youll eat that beat up
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05-02-04, 11:35 PM | #7 | |||||
smiley on ya mothers
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lol.. aiight man im a work on that shit more
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05-06-04, 12:03 AM | #8 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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decent,but yea you need to wrok on flow,and add a bit of complexity to your shit.respect for elevaitin tho
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05-06-04, 12:06 AM | #9 | |||||
smiley on ya mothers
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hey chow check out that triumph joint of mine
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