Battle Rules:

5 bars
loser pays 200$[site money]
No Crew Votes!!!!
no dick ride votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 01:09 AM

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DQ'ed for freeposting battle in LL

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:24 AM.

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 08:59 AM.

mah verse is ready when u are............................

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make this a kodak moment, be sure that my image is perfect...
ya written words is so whack, ya name needed symbols to work wit...

make this one an ass whopping that youve never really had before...
leave voters wanting more, like dying diabetic kids in candy stores...

after this battle youll be dissappointed,lookin for mirrors.punchin yaself...
make you do like the last time you lost,screamin SOMEBODY HELP!!!!...

cleanse your mouth with acid, mix in some mouthwash and soap...
kustom image my ass! same picture, shown in a different "scope"...*

what does your life come to when you fuckin wit me?.....dead...
your verse couldnt top mine if you posted it in a sticky thread...

*"Scope" is a type of mouthwash, used in the line above it...duh.

yo...check it
ya ''Spits-Are-Dim''...| this ''Bitch-Cant-Win''...|b/c Phantom stays below [blow] me like ''Dicks-To-Chins''...| 1

ill disolve Phantom with my holy spits [water] like vampire ''Slayers''...| your not winning cuz ya ''Raps-Are-Gayer''...| ill keep him from getting *11* like bad ''Craps-Players''...| 2 (his rekord was 10-2....think)

phantom ur losing 200$ , dont u really ''Need-That''?...| his dick ride votes are known for inadequate ''Feed-Back''...|ur not winning b/c ya punches stay not connecting like dislocated ''Knee-Caps''...| 3

my bars will have u more shooken than ''Loose-Tooths''...|I ''Bruise-Dudes''...| might as well battle me with pictures, just to be honest cuz ya crew sig intimidates me more than ''You-Do''...|4

ku$tum ''Disease-Free-And-He-A-Hoe''...|so after this ass whoppin ''Leave-Me-Alone''...| my votes wil be like *star~wars* the way ill have R2 + ''C3-And-P.o''...| 5....(c3p0, phantom no votes 2+3=5)

good luck

Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

kustam took this easy
phantom punches were weak not really hot
good struc and flow but no real metas and personals were non existant
kustam u had alot of decnt metas and punches, likke dislocated neecaps and loose tooths line.. but ya struc was hard to read
overall u put more more effort
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Voted For: Phantom

Both of you were good
Kustum: yours was iight but your structure was messed and i couldnt read it well but it was good and decent you had ok strucutre and ya punches were ok and so were you personals good lines and ok vere overall

Phantom: good shit good lines overall but i really don't like it when you space each bar but yours was good you had gos punches and ya personals were good also you had better structure and flow so you get the win

Vote Phantom

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

phantom with a better flow i aint hti the link im not doing that nomore cuz in real battles there are no links and i think that shit is getting real gay good 4th bar and ok ender good opener second bar naw and the link naw good wordplay a 7/10
kustom flow is a little off but wordplay was here also vocab was too basically yall the same level but kustom you killed it with hard ass punches like that crew sig shit good ender opener naw second bar hit hard and 3rd and 4th i already said a 8/10
no hate basically i think kustom took this with harder punches phantom had the flow and all other areas was a tie so punches overdo flow anyday to me vote kustom

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good votes both 1-1 still uppin good battle phantom

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2-1 mah bad.............................................

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yeah good battle. i think i shoulda used more quotations cuz i dont think niggas is seein my wordplay...but good job

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Voted For: Phantom

Phantom i just gotta say ya style was much easier and better to read cuz. I just cant sit there and decipher thru that BS thats written down there. Yo got nice punches, nice wordplay nice flow and shit it all just connected together well. I liked the line about the scope you aint need to explain it it was tight. The diabetic kids one was funny as shit too cuz nice shit.

Kustom cuz I think yo was just tryin too hard, you just aint really come up wit anything down there. You had some wordplay and shit, but it was just here and there, real sporatic. Nuttin really was throwin and hittin cuz. Just keep it clean and simple youll get there.