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03-04-05, 03:00 AM
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Ms. Get Gully
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Battle Vs Arro
IP: 95A2 09D0
some kid i battled off aol....wanted to get views on how my verse was ...kid ended up not recording. or whatever..no showed then told me he'd get his wife to spit back at me .. his name is IBornArr0GantI
Replied to: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179543 and TMKD's collab wit geztik and Rell.. www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/165 |
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03-04-05, 03:40 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
vocals a lil loud. but nice flow, and not just for a femaile.....................kind of loose the beat at times, but your saying ok shit, sometimes stretchin out words to make it fit....not a bad diss, but not the greatest either. Might want to turn down your vocals and write to the beat, my only suggestions, im not a pro either.....C
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850 holla back at me |
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03-06-05, 10:17 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: C17D 93EB
you already know ya vocals are too high, but yeah, I'm definetly feelin' ya vocab on this...flow got off at one opint but other than that, shit's smooth...good shyt mami, do da dayum thang...
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03-06-05, 11:00 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
You need a new mic. Flow was was pretty on point - but needed variance. I got bored really quickly into it. You rhyme A LOT like "mama mia" form No Limit. In your production quality - it's easy to see that you record your verses in pieces like 4 bars at a time, which dropped quality big-time. Lyrics were okay I guess. Maybe there's personals there that I couldnt' connect with - but it didn't seem real impactful IMO. Seemed more liek a casual diss track than a full-on battle.
Once agian, your fade outs are the god of ass fade-outs. That abrupt stop shit is kid shit - you can def do better. It takes no time to correct any of the problems in this track. All in all not a hard-hitting diss track. Just "okay". Def seen better from you.
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