ayo you come up in my thread, screamin and talkin shit dogg?/
you done got me pissed off, now ready to tear yo limbs off/

im game tight, slang cane right, aim at ya brain faggit/
this aint right, i stain whites, aimin them thangs faggit/

you a soft ass, only thing i do right is cough gats/
knock fake niggas off maps, spittin these raw raps/
on the block? naw you can't talk that/
im right where the brawl at/
and im smashin this niggas brains in with a wooden base ball bat/

you a lame ass, no game ass, low brains ass nigga/
droolin on yo shirt in front a pretty dame ass nigga/

with yo shirt untucked at a formal gathered community/
all my niggas know is unity, aint shit this faggit can do to me/

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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky

U rhymed faggits twice in one bar--thats a no no lyrically becuz ppl exspect variety..u seem pretty street as fat as ur style...but try to uo p ur vocab and u attempted some multies but they were weak...i liked the last line though..i did *uno*

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

thanks fro the reply homegirl...your a female right?

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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky

this is pretty good dawg..but can u do better???u should uppin ur voacb jst ta let u know

yes i am ..unos

SpokenB.

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

hmmm. how did you count your bars off? 16 bars= 32 lines. that's how i was taught. but whatever. this was not that good honestly. who were you dissing? why? with those questions unanswered, this really didn't make too much sense. the multis were pretty weak, and there was very little variety. you rhymed faggits twice in one bar, you rhymed nigga twice in one bar. this had to be a keystyle. work on your vocab and your multis if your gonna use them in everything.

16BARS is the nigga im dissin homeboy. check yo history before you some up in my thread tellin me my shit aint all that great. but thanks for yo reply folks.

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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky

yo this 16BARS yo shit was weak. you talking about me? Well this is tha lifestyle of tha rich and famous. Yo life change quick, for tha rich price i ca leave you broke an nameless. Talk fast and i slow yo face. I'll send you to meet god today. Don't make came slap a brith mark on yo face.................. IF YOU WANT IT COME AND GET IT BITCH.
DON"T EVER TALK SHIT TO ME
<16BARS> BRING THA HEAT

lets battle then.

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i aint no 'sweet studd', im a 'street thug'/
that's quick ta beat a nigga like a 'cheap rug', until he 'leave blood'/ - Big L

I'm goin' 'all out', i tear the 'wall out', i'll knock you 'all out'/
you couldn't grip somethin' heavy unless you pulled my 'balls out'/ - Lucky

people tell me im 'mad-nice', but i take it in strife/
cuz while you had a bad day, I had a 'bad-life'/ - Lucky