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View Poll Results: D523 Vs. *Antic* | |||
*Antic* | 5 | 71.43% | |
D523 | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-22-06, 11:56 PM | #1 |
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D523 vs *Antic*
IP: 20B2 DF4A
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10-14 lines no being gay no d/r no crew votes anddd yeah dont be gay good luck Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 01-23-06 at 11:56 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
01-23-06, 12:05 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:05 AM.
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01-23-06, 12:54 AM | #3 | |
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IP: F557 5BE5
*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-06 12:54 AM.
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01-23-06, 12:59 AM | #4 |
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Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention
this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** *Sodomy is anal sex ** Tight end , wide receiver - gay sex ***- Audio(out of yo) league
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01-23-06, 02:08 AM | #5 |
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IP: F557 5BE5
Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'//
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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s |
01-23-06, 12:40 PM | #6 |
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good job,
bumpin this battle up
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OptimisticallyGenius |
01-23-06, 08:31 PM | #7 |
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BUMP, cmon vote on this shit
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01-23-06, 09:42 PM | #8 | |
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Voted For: *Antic*
Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension Blah played as fuck Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* mehhhh Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! played but iiight It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique iiight It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” no ......bullshit My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** ..................................... Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** wack closer basiclly you had bad punches some were played and most were juss dumb flow was iight Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'... D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// LMAO good punch/personal nice opener Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// iiiight I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// nahhhh I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// iight but played concept I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// nope not feeling it Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// nice closer overall antic had beter punches and he flowed better nice personals too
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01-23-06, 09:58 PM | #9 |
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love to know how my first line is played.. but ok
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01-24-06, 03:10 PM | #10 |
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uppin this shitttt
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01-24-06, 03:23 PM | #11 | |
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This was feedback posted for D523
IP: 9E2F CDE8
Like comics and jokes his name is funny but his 'material's not'...
D523? I'll "bar" and code his name on tha side of a 'cereal box'// ^comics and jokes usually don't have funny names, but funny material....plus, the punch has horrible wording Like unexplained votes ya can't "count" his numbers or 'letters'... His style like rotten flesh fallin' off cuz my bars fuckin' this 'lepper'// ^ how is his style like rotting flesh falling off? that doesn't make sense, and i doubt he's a lepper I'm 'certain it's fact' my style a slave driver fuckin' 'workin' this fag'... His style's a book and I'm Hitler cuz of the way I'm 'burnin' this cat'// man, say some real shit...his style's not a book, you are not hitler...and the punch is played I'll roll past the 'D' of '5' guys like I'm number "23" 'runnin' da floor'... Like blind kidz he really can't see my "Bar" or even 'come in tha door'// d of 5 guys? wtf? you're number 23? WTF?....not a bad punch, horrible wording and concept is played I'm a belligerent cook grillin' you the way I fucked up 'all your orders... Like pictures I got this bitch straight pinned down in 'all four corners'// ^best punch in the battle, shoulda said posters though, cause i dont pin up my pictures, i frame them Street? The only "crack" he sees is when he 'Fucks a plumber'... Like 'his name' this 'shit-stain' ain't unique he's 'just a number'// ^who cares about seeing crack, thats a fucking bad thing, and the punch fuggin sucked Kid tries to spit so hard, but aint gettin nobodys attention this mothafucka couldnt STICK OUT in the third dimension ^played concept, but not bad Knew I was gonna merk you nigga, it was guarenteed Beatin your ass so bad, people confuse this for sodomy* ^barely rhymes, but not bad, kinda gay though Saying he’ll give me a ‘taste’ of his style, thinkin he’s the shit? Right... I listened to his advice, I now know what the taste of shit like! ^played concept It’s like the amazing race dawg, and it’s impossible to Pass me I’ll leave you in the past, instead of antic, people be callin u antique ^creative, wording poorly though It’s like we was back in school, when I bulled him and took his lunch But now he takes the batman approach, you know, “Wack” “Punch” ^concept played, and you didn't take his lunch My words are so sharp, resembling some sort of a meat cleaver Like in football, faggit used to be a tight end, but now a wide receiver** ^oooh, seen this before as well *smh*, not bad Claim to be an audio head? Well, buddy, please believe That when battling me?? You audio league*** ^a good punch if not bitten, this won the battle yeah, both you need to step up, d523 won this because he had better overall punches, other dude, you need to get ideas of better concepts, word
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01-24-06, 03:24 PM | #12 | ||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
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OMFG YOU ARE SO WHACK AND YOU DESERVE TO DIE, YOU ARE NOT ELITE, YOU ARE SUCH A FUCKING DICKRIDER, wowowowowooww, holy shit, antic did not win
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01-24-06, 06:24 PM | #13 |
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IP: F557 5BE5
everyone's a critic...just a fuckin' textbattle...means nothin'...ayo if peepz gonna take time to do a break down of the verses, don't just say "this sucks" or "that's wack", explain some shit...that's just dumb.
uppin'.
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Overall Net Text Record ~ 30-12 w/24 K.O.s Overall Net Audio Record ~ 3-3 w/ 3 K.O.s |
01-24-06, 06:37 PM | #14 |
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IP: 9465 0DDF
Voted For: *Antic*
this was a nice battle man............dopeness this was good and close. creativity: D523 wordplay: ANTIC punches: D523 flow:ANTIC overall verse: ANTIC word. nice battle guy's.
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01-24-06, 06:54 PM | #15 |
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these people man.. i appreciate the vote, but, if we both have 2, how does he win?
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